Gaza

Bitter pills
swallowed
meet bitter bile
and destroy all
clarity,
all ability
to determine
friend from foe.
Bitter pills dissolved
in bitter bile
must wait for
time
to be resolved.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Guzzi Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 5:16 PM
Time does not seem to aid the war or the warriors creed, sad. Light & Love
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November 28, 2009 at 5:16 AM
BRILLIANT! sincerely, Lainie
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November 26, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Interesting featured poem that you have written. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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November 25, 2009 at 10:39 AM
Ahellas - congrats on your featurd poem this week. Rgds Janette
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November 24, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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November 23, 2009 at 7:50 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on your being featured this week. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Iolanda
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November 23, 2009 at 11:55 AM
Many congratulations on your poetry being shared with us this week >> James
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November 23, 2009 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Ahellas. Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 3:10 AM
Excellent write and well deserving selection for being featured this week. Best wishes and keep writing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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November 22, 2009 at 5:29 PM
Interesting perspective. So much truth in your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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