Gayle

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september gayle swept through splitting trees.... decayed hearts exposed

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/22/2017 7:23:00 PM

Wow - excellent haiku inspired by your powerful photo... or vice versa... powerful haiku inspired by excellent photo ;-)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/23/2017 6:25:00 AM

Line, We had what was once called a September Gayle to come through here recently..There were many large limbs and some trees that were down..Some of those trees had the decayed heart..I wrote the Haiku then looked for a picture..Thanks for the comments...I appreciate you dropping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2017 6:59:00 PM

Love the play on the word gale, Sara. Irma and Gayle. They should be locked up for life!!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/18/2017 6:06:00 AM

Andrea, I am using the old English spelling of the word gayle meaning storm..Hurricanes used to be called September Gayles..The Gayle named Irma was a bad sister but it could have been even worse as far as loss of life if the evacuations had not taken place like they did..Thanks for dropping by.Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/17/2017 5:23:00 AM

Wow, now this is an exquisite write if I say so myself my friend! I am truly amazed by your amazing skill at writing this illustrious Haiku Sara! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/16/2017 2:38:00 PM

Lovely presentation--I see the the tree and the hearts exposed!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/16/2017 10:37:00 AM

lovely creative write, my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/16/2017 1:20:00 PM

Jack, Thanks for the kind review..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara