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Gate To Lamenting

The old ornate rusted gate creaks and groans with my grief and I fall weeping- ________________________________________________________ Inspired by Rick Parise ' contest theme..The Rusted Gate Fifth Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/12/2016 7:31:00 PM
Beautiful with your trademark sadness Constance:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2016 12:19:00 PM
I love to see good things come to good people. This is one of those times. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/12/2016 10:12:00 AM
Very touching poem, congratulations!
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Date: 11/11/2016 6:30:00 PM
Hi BW, Congratulations on your win: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/11/2016 4:19:00 PM
Beautiful, Constance...with powerful, sad imagery. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/11/2016 2:45:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work even though it is filled with emotion..Excellent one for the winners' page..Congrats
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Date: 11/11/2016 11:12:00 AM
incredible win , dear cinstance... my sweet congrats to you.. huggs
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Date: 11/11/2016 8:25:00 AM
This is beautiful, Constance! I can hear the groans, both of the gate and your own, echoing a sad lament. Congratulations on a fine win; it could easily have place higher. // paul
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Date: 11/11/2016 6:33:00 AM
Such a sad scene. Congratulations Constance.
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Date: 11/10/2016 8:52:00 PM
Back to say congrats, Constance!
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Date: 11/9/2016 6:36:00 PM
The pain evoked in this poem tugs at my heartstrings!
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Date: 11/9/2016 10:53:00 AM
BW this paints such a vivid picture...and a sharp twinge...well done
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Date: 11/8/2016 3:52:00 PM
Beautifully tragic, Constance.
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Date: 11/8/2016 10:08:00 AM
A sad but beautiful one liner, Constance:)
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Date: 11/8/2016 8:55:00 AM
Beautiful, BW. Very eloquent expression of sadness. Barry.
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Date: 11/8/2016 8:54:00 AM
Very nice!
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