Constance La France Poet Free verse

Gate To Lamenting

The old ornate rusted gate creaks and groans with my grief and I fall weeping-

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Inspired by Rick Parise ' contest theme..The Rusted Gate

Fifth Place

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Jan Allison November 12, 2016 at 7:31 PM Beautiful with your trademark sadness Constance:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Hansteven Selfa November 12, 2016 at 12:19 PM I love to see good things come to good people. This is one of those times. Congratulations!

Sarita Milliner November 12, 2016 at 10:12 AM Very touching poem, congratulations!

Alexis Y. November 11, 2016 at 6:30 PM Hi BW, Congratulations on your win: -) Alexis

Sandra Haight November 11, 2016 at 4:19 PM Beautiful, Constance...with powerful, sad imagery. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick November 11, 2016 at 2:45 PM Enjoyed reading your work even though it is filled with emotion..Excellent one for the winners' page..Congrats

Nette Onclaud November 11, 2016 at 11:12 AM incredible win , dear cinstance... my sweet congrats to you.. huggs

Paul Callus November 11, 2016 at 8:25 AM This is beautiful, Constance! I can hear the groans, both of the gate and your own, echoing a sad lament. Congratulations on a fine win; it could easily have place higher. // paul

Jean Murray November 11, 2016 at 6:33 AM Such a sad scene. Congratulations Constance.

Kim Rodrigues November 10, 2016 at 8:52 PM Back to say congrats, Constance!

Carol B. November 9, 2016 at 6:36 PM The pain evoked in this poem tugs at my heartstrings!

John Lawless November 9, 2016 at 10:53 AM BW this paints such a vivid picture...and a sharp twinge...well done

Andrea Dietrich November 8, 2016 at 3:52 PM Beautifully tragic, Constance.

Joanna Daniel November 8, 2016 at 10:08 AM A sad but beautiful one liner, Constance:)

Barry Stebbings November 8, 2016 at 8:55 AM Beautiful, BW. Very eloquent expression of sadness. Barry.

Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2016 at 8:54 AM Very nice!