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August 27, 2023

Poem of the day on August 28, 2023
Placed 1st: G or T Personification Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May


 

Regally it stands, the staunch guardian of her lonesome heart, Reminiscing in revelries of yore, treasured memories impart, Defying glum turbulence of now, hanging on to seasons past, When springs-winsome banished, doldrums harsh-winters cast. Disheartened, the gate harkens back~ O, so young its master died, Lamenting of distressed times, when grief stilled her teary eyed; Yet, with resolve, it squeaks its hinges, resounding a voice of pride, Beckoning to benevolence of bliss, fate had so callously denied. With kindred vibes it greets her, vying elation of cherished days, Suppressing aches and rattles of its rusting, clamoring, phase; Preferring realm of time, when he was the keeper of this place, As dutifully now it opens wide, exuding mirth of youthful grace. O, how fondly the gate recalls, dance of duo beneath full moon, Humming melodies intimate, passions of doting souls croon, Embracing celebration of life, as heartbeats enamored attune, To rhythms emanating song of love, strumming infatuated tune. Despite groans and whimpers, blaring aloud clattering of pain, The gate vows to protect her, refusing ever to wither or wane, Unwavering through thunders, rains, vicious strikes of feeble age, Challenging its steeled bones, to gallantly defy seasons’ rage.

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Date: 9/30/2023 1:57:00 PM
a unique personification, Vijay, with so many layers hidden within your lines and verses. As I reflected upon your words, I realize that we all have 'gates'--keepers of our broken hearts and spirits...and how staunchly they protect us.A masterfull write, Vijay. Will fave...enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 9/2/2023 10:19:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/2/2023 6:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win Vijay, very nicely written
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Date: 9/1/2023 6:39:00 AM
I am back again to congratulate you on this gem being awarded as POTD! I added this to my fav earlier, last time I commented and I see it did indeed make POTD! God bless you.
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Date: 8/30/2023 1:07:00 AM
Vijay sorry I am late to your party. Incredible poetry and the use of Personification, such a clever theme. I can see why this great Poetry from you got the POTD you never stop amazing your fans. Just when we thought it could not get any better. You come up with another great piece. Again my friend congratulations and another favorite. God bless you...
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Date: 8/30/2023 11:32:00 AM
Always a delight to read your comments my friend. Your kind thoughts are always valued and appreciated, Michael. So special to receive your FAVE. Many many thanks.
Date: 8/29/2023 10:43:00 PM
Oh wow, what an excellent take on the personification style, you've so marvelously captured the scenes here, in your beautifully descriptive vocabulary and enchanting wordplay! The way this flows with rhymes is just so mellifluous and astounding! Heartiest congratulations on POTD, well-deserved! :)
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Date: 8/30/2023 11:31:00 AM
Glad to see you again on my page, Hiya. Much appreciate your insightful remarks. Many thanks.
Date: 8/29/2023 6:45:00 AM
this is excellent personification. Also congrats, I see it got a POTD!!
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Date: 8/30/2023 11:29:00 AM
So nice to hear that from you Andrea. Many thanks.
Date: 8/29/2023 12:15:00 AM
I love poems about reflection, memories and nostalgia and this wonderful POTD “Gates” excelled and was an exceptional “feel good” poem for me Vijay. Just so beautiful…Congratulations! Debx
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:44:00 AM
Glad to see you, Deb, and glad it conveyed feel good vibes, my friend. We need more of those these days. Much appreciate your cheerful remarks. Many thanks.
Date: 8/28/2023 10:03:00 PM
Ah treasured memories of good times gone by. Things the heart will forever hold close the gate will hold forever safe. This is lovely Vijay. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:41:00 AM
So very kind of you, Judy. Much appreciate your thoughtful insights. Many thanks for visiting and commenting. Blessings.
Date: 8/28/2023 8:43:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:39:00 AM
Much appreciate your return visit my friend. Many thanks, Kim.
Date: 8/28/2023 7:54:00 PM
Beautiful moments and sweet memories, are behind the gate. The heart embracing each one. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:38:00 AM
I'm thankful for your return visit and gracious remarks. Thanks for your return visit my friend. Hugs to you as well, Brandy.
Date: 8/28/2023 4:31:00 PM
Her memories are the stories that tell who she is… Vijay, another grand piece that leaves me breathless! BIG congratulations on POTD dear friend. I’m just so happy for you :)
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:37:00 AM
Glad to see you again my friend. Much appreciate your kind thoughts gracing my page. Many thanks, Akkina.
Date: 8/28/2023 3:35:00 PM
wonderful personification Vijay , many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:35:00 AM
Glad to see you again, Jan. Much appreciate your kind thoughts. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.
Date: 8/28/2023 3:11:00 PM
I think that the reason memory is so strong an influence throughout our lives, for better for worse, is because the soul senses a hereafter, and how our hearts go on forever. Beautiful poetry my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2023 6:34:00 AM
You are very kind my friend. Much appreciate your thoughtful insights, Joe. Many thanks.
Date: 8/28/2023 2:46:00 PM
Vijay, back with a big congratulations!!!
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:33:00 AM
Thanks for your return visit Mike. Much appreciate.
Date: 8/28/2023 1:04:00 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on your deserved POTD, Enjoy your honor, my friend
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:33:00 AM
Thanks for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 8/28/2023 12:29:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading it again. Your "Gate" is a wonderful write. Have a great day with your win............
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:32:00 AM
Much appreciate your return visit Paula. Thanks again for your kind feedback.
Date: 8/28/2023 8:18:00 AM
Awesome, marvellous and magnificent personification. Truly worthy of a POTD. Best for a win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2023 10:31:00 AM
Glad to see you again, Victor. Hoping and wishing you are feeling well. Many thanks for your uplifting remarks.
Date: 8/28/2023 8:05:00 AM
Lovely Personification poetry, Vijay. The passion and courage of the gate drew me into the world of looking back at a time of more purpose and the diminishing role we play as we age. Best of all was the continued commitment to protect her. It resonates with my soul. Congratulation on your POTD, my dear friend! This goes straight to my FAVs list. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2023 10:30:00 AM
So eloquently said, my friend. Always a delight when you visit, Bill. Much appreciate your heartfelt remarks. So special as well to receive your FAVE! Many thanks.
Date: 8/28/2023 6:55:00 AM
Dear Vijay, An absolutely awesome write and most deserving honor as POTD. It show cases your talent dear poet. Enjoyed.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2023 7:54:00 AM
So very kind of you, dear Nancy. Wonderful to read your glowing feedback my friend. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 8/28/2023 6:51:00 AM
Oh I missed this masterpiece! Excellent. Congratulations for POTD ! I hope you have a nice day. Enjoy! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2023 7:52:00 AM
So glad you are here my friend. Much appreciate, as always, Heidi. Many thanks.
Date: 8/28/2023 6:31:00 AM
Awesome personification Veej. I'd like to see that gate relent and open up a bit. Love can be found again and she deserves it. Nice potd
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2023 7:51:00 AM
Glad to see you again Tom. I always appreciate your thoughtful remarks. Many thanks for stopping by.
Date: 8/28/2023 6:30:00 AM
A marvellous write Vijay, gates see it all, love and heartbreak, but best of all they keep us private and safe. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2023 7:46:00 AM
So well said, Belle. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks for visiting and commenting.
Date: 8/28/2023 5:20:00 AM
Vijay, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2023 5:49:00 AM
Thank you Tania. Always a joy to see you on my page. Much appreciate!
Date: 8/28/2023 3:47:00 AM
Vijay--what a fabulous personification! I found the poem captivating at every stanza. It flows and the rhythm is perfect. Lots of favorite lines in this one. In the end, the gate does what it's designed to do--challenging the seasons but enduring them all. Congrats on a well-deserved POTD, Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2023 5:48:00 AM
I am delighted by your graceful feedback, Sara. Your thoughts are spot on. Much appreciate you visiting and commenting. Many thanks.
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