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August 27, 2023

Poem of the day on August 28, 2023
Placed 1st: G or T Personification Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May


 

Gate

Regally it stands, the staunch guardian of her lonesome heart,
Reminiscing in revelries of yore, treasured memories impart,
Defying glum turbulence of now, hanging on to seasons past,
When springs-winsome banished, doldrums harsh-winters cast. 

Disheartened, the gate harkens back~ O, so young its master died,
Lamenting of distressed times, when grief stilled her teary eyed;
Yet, with resolve, it squeaks its hinges, resounding a voice of pride,
Beckoning to benevolence of bliss, fate had so callously denied.

With kindred vibes it greets her, vying elation of cherished days,
Suppressing aches and rattles of its rusting, clamoring, phase;
Preferring realm of time, when he was the keeper of this place,
As dutifully now it opens wide, exuding mirth of youthful grace.

O, how fondly the gate recalls, dance of duo beneath full moon,
Humming melodies intimate, passions of doting souls croon,
Embracing celebration of life, as heartbeats enamored attune,
To rhythms emanating song of love, strumming infatuated tune.

Despite groans and whimpers, blaring aloud clattering of pain,
The gate vows to protect her, refusing ever to wither or wane,
Unwavering through thunders, rains, vicious strikes of feeble age,
Challenging its steeled bones, to gallantly defy seasons’ rage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Narain Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Back with congrats on your win.
May Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Congrats on your win Vijay, very nicely written
Lindley Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 6:39 AM
I am back again to congratulate you on this gem being awarded as POTD! I added this to my fav earlier, last time I commented and I see it did indeed make POTD! God bless you.
Tor Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:07 AM
Vijay sorry I am late to your party. Incredible poetry and the use of Personification, such a clever theme. I can see why this great Poetry from you got the POTD you never stop amazing your fans. Just when we thought it could not get any better. You come up with another great piece. Again my friend congratulations and another favorite. God bless you...
Pandit Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Always a delight to read your comments my friend. Your kind thoughts are always valued and appreciated, Michael. So special to receive your FAVE. Many many thanks.
Sharma  Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 10:43 PM
Oh wow, what an excellent take on the personification style, you've so marvelously captured the scenes here, in your beautifully descriptive vocabulary and enchanting wordplay! The way this flows with rhymes is just so mellifluous and astounding! Heartiest congratulations on POTD, well-deserved! :)
Pandit Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 11:31 AM
Glad to see you again on my page, Hiya. Much appreciate your insightful remarks. Many thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:45 AM
this is excellent personification. Also congrats, I see it got a POTD!!
Pandit Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 11:29 AM
So nice to hear that from you Andrea. Many thanks.
M  Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:15 AM
I love poems about reflection, memories and nostalgia and this wonderful POTD “Gates” excelled and was an exceptional “feel good” poem for me Vijay. Just so beautiful…Congratulations! Debx
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:44 AM
Glad to see you, Deb, and glad it conveyed feel good vibes, my friend. We need more of those these days. Much appreciate your cheerful remarks. Many thanks.
Ball Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:03 PM
Ah treasured memories of good times gone by. Things the heart will forever hold close the gate will hold forever safe. This is lovely Vijay. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:41 AM
So very kind of you, Judy. Much appreciate your thoughtful insights. Many thanks for visiting and commenting. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 8:43 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Much appreciate your return visit my friend. Many thanks, Kim.
Nicole Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Beautiful moments and sweet memories, are behind the gate. The heart embracing each one. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:38 AM
I'm thankful for your return visit and gracious remarks. Thanks for your return visit my friend. Hugs to you as well, Brandy.
Downing  Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 4:31 PM
Her memories are the stories that tell who she is… Vijay, another grand piece that leaves me breathless! BIG congratulations on POTD dear friend. I’m just so happy for you :)
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Glad to see you again my friend. Much appreciate your kind thoughts gracing my page. Many thanks, Akkina.
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 3:35 PM
wonderful personification Vijay , many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:35 AM
Glad to see you again, Jan. Much appreciate your kind thoughts. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.
DiMino Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 3:11 PM
I think that the reason memory is so strong an influence throughout our lives, for better for worse, is because the soul senses a hereafter, and how our hearts go on forever. Beautiful poetry my friend.
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:34 AM
You are very kind my friend. Much appreciate your thoughtful insights, Joe. Many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 2:46 PM
Vijay, back with a big congratulations!!!
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Thanks for your return visit Mike. Much appreciate.
Poet Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 1:04 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on your deserved POTD, Enjoy your honor, my friend
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Thanks for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate, as always.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 12:29 PM
Back with congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading it again. Your "Gate" is a wonderful write. Have a great day with your win............
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Much appreciate your return visit Paula. Thanks again for your kind feedback.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Awesome, marvellous and magnificent personification. Truly worthy of a POTD. Best for a win.
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Glad to see you again, Victor. Hoping and wishing you are feeling well. Many thanks for your uplifting remarks.
Baker Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Lovely Personification poetry, Vijay. The passion and courage of the gate drew me into the world of looking back at a time of more purpose and the diminishing role we play as we age. Best of all was the continued commitment to protect her. It resonates with my soul. Congratulation on your POTD, my dear friend! This goes straight to my FAVs list. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:30 AM
So eloquently said, my friend. Always a delight when you visit, Bill. Much appreciate your heartfelt remarks. So special as well to receive your FAVE! Many thanks.
Kaufman Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 6:55 AM
Dear Vijay, An absolutely awesome write and most deserving honor as POTD. It show cases your talent dear poet. Enjoyed.
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 7:54 AM
So very kind of you, dear Nancy. Wonderful to read your glowing feedback my friend. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Sands Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Oh I missed this masterpiece! Excellent. Congratulations for POTD ! I hope you have a nice day. Enjoy! :)
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 7:52 AM
So glad you are here my friend. Much appreciate, as always, Heidi. Many thanks.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 6:30 AM
A marvellous write Vijay, gates see it all, love and heartbreak, but best of all they keep us private and safe. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 7:46 AM
So well said, Belle. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks for visiting and commenting.
Kitchin Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 5:20 AM
Vijay, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD!
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Thank you Tania. Always a joy to see you on my page. Much appreciate!
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 3:34 AM
- "Suppressing aches and rattles of its rusting" ... at the same time the happy memories live deep in the heart ... a wonderful poem, Vijay - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Yes indeed-- you hit the mark with your remarks. There is the ache of rusting and also the joy of happy memories. Much appreciate, as always, Anne-Lise. Many thanks.
One Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 2:28 AM
Wonderful personification, this has been done really well and the rhymes and flow are so good, but your rhythm is always spot on... The gate vows to protect, just like all gates do.. i have an iron gate... very strong! Congratulations on POTD also.
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 5:45 AM
Honored to read your valued feedback, SO. We are thrilled to read your poems, whenever you return--though quite rare these days. Much appreciate your insightful thoughts my friend. Many thanks.
Seeker Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 1:59 AM
What a tremendous personification, bringing to life the sturdy gate, holding firm its resolve, against all adversity ~ warmest congratulations on POTD, Vijay, most eloquently penned indeed
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 5:41 AM
So special to read such insightful remarks, US. Especially so coming from a talented writer. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
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