Gate

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Poetry/Verse/Gate
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1557-092-22
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 22, 2023
Submitted to the Standard Contest, Any Poem
sponsor, Robert James Liguori, Judged 06/23/2023

First Place

Grief, Tombstone, Cross, Graveyard, Consolation, Quiet

 
The gate to the old cemetery is rusty and old, though once upon a time is was elegant and gilded; ornate with filigree tracery ornamentation, now, it is decaying, fragile, yet still beautiful to me. I push to open it and the gate creaks, groans, moans; and sighs an objection. Stepping into the cemetery is like entering tranquility, the green wraps around me like a warm cloak; the majestic old trees are like a protecting canopy, I am awed by all the hues of green I behold. The birds are non stop, oh how divine are their songs; many headstones are in ruin. I begin to walk a worn path looking at the stones, unable to read the inscriptions, I find that so sad; yet, still some have flowers either planted or bought, oh such a peaceful place it makes me want to weep. I hope my resting place can be like this old cemetery; full of green peace. Then, I retrace my steps until I stand at the gate, pushing to open it creaks and moans again; and did I hear voices whispering, impossible I think, I turn expecting to see someone standing there. Pushing the gate, I hear the whispers, is it possible; or is it impossible.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/24/2023 4:02:00 PM
Great imagery and tranquil feeling. Great verse for the G contest. Blessing my dear
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2023 8:25:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings !
Date: 6/24/2023 11:22:00 AM
Your words play within my heart and their sadness comes alive and fills me with overpowering emotions as you gently take me to your private place, where feelings can drift and pain seeks refuge. Very well written, my friend; Emile.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2023 8:26:00 AM
Emile, thank you so much for the nice comment and compliment, your friend !
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter