Gasolene Puddles

Trying to capture the sky’s reflections in gasolene puddles,
Though 
I know
there’s nothing but rubble,
at the bottom.
But, 
If I  looked so high 
I’d puke before I saw the ground,
but around here,
it’s hard to stay safe sound.

Red hands burn out,
before the ashes fall down,
I hope I could hide these burns away,
but the box frames seem to stay,
seem to grow on blue.

Blue is the color I love so much,
but not like this.

Blue Is sundays.

There’s something about sundays,
that makes everything worse,
it’s living a bombshell,
waiting for time to burst,
No sunshine 
just “I hate you’s” and “You need to go’s.”
Shut the door behind you!
I think should go, 
where the child’s things grow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 7:26 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Janet - I choose your first moving and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Gifford Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Your thoughts and feelings are well expressed here. Blessings, Darlene
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