Garden's Winding Path

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Deep golden orb rises in the east
Revealing a heavy frost and frozen bath
Sparrow scratches in summer's garden now deceased 
Making a way for next year's garden winding path

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Valsa George

Date: 1/24/2022 5:31:00 AM

With winter plants and flowers disappear, but to be resurrected in spring ! It is all a cyclic process ! A fine write Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/24/2022 11:39:00 AM

Valsa, We have the hope that spring will come and bring those beautiful trees, shrubs, and flowers riding in on its lightweight spring shawl. Your visit is to my page is always inspiring. Sara

DM Babbit

Date: 1/20/2022 10:02:00 AM

Beautiful, the path still winds in winter.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/20/2022 11:49:00 AM

DM, In my garden the path is covered with leaves, but it is still the garden, but at rest. Your visits to my page are always assuaging. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/20/2022 9:07:00 AM

You have work to do: digging mostly and planting trays with flower seed.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/20/2022 11:45:00 AM

Victor, Yes, a garden is hard work. Our grandson helps a little in the fall and in the spring. That, of course, is a picture from the internet. We need to reword all of our garden areas now and we are not able to do that work anymore. Your visit to my page is always restoring. Sara