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Gardens of Delight

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for Joseph May's Alphabet Soup Poetry Contest

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Alluring butterflies collectively dance enchantingly, finding gardens. Hummingbirds investigate jasmine, knowing luscious magnolia nectar offers precious quantity. Radiant sunshine tantalizes ursinia vibrant with xanthic yielding zest.

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Joseph May

Date: 2/3/2025 5:53:00 AM

Wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/2/2025 10:43:00 PM

Ah, the beauty of your words! Congratulations on your top win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Karen Jones

Date: 2/2/2025 8:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win!

David Crandall

Date: 2/2/2025 8:42:00 AM

Great job - you made it work beautifully!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/2/2025 8:06:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again.... Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................

Valsa George

Date: 1/19/2025 3:40:00 AM

Dear Andrea, this is a beautiful entry. It flows naturally and the garden where alluring butterflies and humming birds haunt is brought alive in lovely and vibrant shades. All the Best!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/17/2025 11:07:00 PM

Such a stunning and creative take on the form dear sweet andrea, youv nailed it and delivered one that is so unique and so far one of the best and most seamless ones iv read for this contest. I love how youv ended too: it is quite picturesque and beautiful! Pleasure reading this gem! Im sure this will be a top winner! Best wishes always

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/17/2025 3:57:00 PM

enchanting piece of poetry, i like every images and sonority, thanks a lot

Paige Hind

Date: 1/17/2025 2:01:00 PM

Lovely - nature is carrying "xanthic yielding zest" on creature's wings!

Tom Valles

Date: 1/17/2025 12:37:00 PM

Wow. This was so good; I didn't even notice the form at first. Brilliant as always, Andrea!

Tom Woody

Date: 1/17/2025 11:55:00 AM

Very nicely done. Ugh! Those x words

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/17/2025 12:27:00 PM

Z are about as bad. Nothing much to choose from at all.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2025 11:37:00 AM

- A fragrant and beautiful garden, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/17/2025 11:19:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely write. I knew you would come up with something wonderful. "Good Luck" looks like we both did this one... Have a fun day as you write away..................

Daisy Meadows

Date: 1/17/2025 10:55:00 AM

A beautiful and clever poem. Enjoyed reading this. Well written!

Robert James Liguori

Date: 1/17/2025 10:08:00 AM

Wow! I would love to stroll in this garden!!! Especially if I had my Walkman on listening to Glenn Hughes!!! Your poem is delightful. And you covered all the letters nicely!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/17/2025 10:30:00 AM

thanks. I find this form quite difficult to do.

Jay Narain

Date: 1/17/2025 9:59:00 AM

Nice alphabet poem. Picturesque nature.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/17/2025 10:30:00 AM

thanks, Jay