Gardens Golden

Gardens of golden threaded Cyprus; evergreens perfume sings me halfway to sleep. I breathe in the wafting scents of neighbor’s roses; with elation my spirit weeps. The drumming of leaping goldfish in a pond nearby calls to dragonflies and they zip by me; lovely translucence in the spotlight rays of old Sol; This is how things should be. City life holds no joy for those who are naturalists; only concrete and boredom. Breathing in another scented moment; I can feel the dragonfly wings, beating time to the Koi drums song. Another breath and I ride a dragonfly to liquid refreshment. My vision’s broken only by and old bullfrogs bloated croak. I am a stranger in his world; “Stop staring”, I say to him and his about face response, says he has heard. I watch him snap up a fly with his sticky-quick tongue and one hundred percent accuracy; the Koi drums continue...I melt back into my visioning state, again. The city’s load on my mind is lightening and my heart feels nearly free; of the steel-toothed grinding wheel that is my thankless job. Were it not for nature; I’d go insane; plomp…plomp…plomp…the drums pull me back again. How is it that the human species can take pride in the concrete nightmares they create without a second thought of Gaia’s children? Again, plomp…plomp…plomp of the Koi drums.
3-12-2022 Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 4/20/2022 8:12:00 PM
"my heart feels nearly free" - Great ending too. Congratulations!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/30/2022 2:50:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 4/20/2022 6:45:00 PM
Thank you for your submission and congratulations on your high placing win in the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest! ~BJ
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/30/2022 2:50:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 2/16/2019 11:32:00 PM
I had barely started reading this when I clicked FAV and saved it. It has jumped into my soul and delighted her, and nothing feels better than that my friend. I would highlight the best parts, but then I would have to highlight the entire poem.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/16/2019 11:38:00 PM
Wow, thanks so much; I am glad it "delighted your soul". It's nice to know I've done my job.
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