Connie Marcum Wong Poet Rhyme

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Gardens At Keukenhoff Alouette

Gardens at Keukenhoff (Alouette)

As the tulips rise
With their sweet surprise
Fragrance permeates the air
Colors cover land
From God's divine hand
In these gardens we all share.

Such astounding views
Come enjoy the hues
As varied blossoms cascade.
Seek a bench to gaze
At the mirror maze
With lush tulips on parade.

2-19-19

Gardens Poetry Contest~Premiere Fourth Place~
Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke

The Alouette, created by Jan Turner, consists of two or more stanzas of 6 lines each, with the following set rules:

 Meter: 5, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7
 Rhyme Scheme: a, a, b, c, c, b

 The form name is a French word meaning 'skylark' or larks that fly high, the association to the lark's song being appropriate for the musical quality of this form. The word 'Alouette' can also mean a children's song (usually sung in a group), and although this poetry form is not necessarily for children's poetry (but can be applied that way), it is reminiscent of that style of short lines. Preference for the meter accent is on the third syllable of each line

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Kim Rodrigues April 2, 2019 at 8:05 AM Tulips are a favorite of mine and so is your poem!

Ralph Sergi March 24, 2019 at 1:25 PM aA beautiful poem, Connie You captured this city of tulips very well I know because I was there being in Holland for two years. Connie Marcum Wong April 2, 2019 at 9:20 AM It is one of my favorite cities. I have vacationed there four times. The gardens were a highlight! Thank you Ralph. xxoo

Jack Horne March 22, 2019 at 2:41 PM had to read this - loved visiting this place & you've captured it perfectly. interesting form too - must try it

David Smith March 14, 2019 at 6:10 AM Tranquillity personified. Fantastic poem. Shame more people don't frequent our parks as much as they used to. Nothing like inhaling the many fragrances a garden can give us. best regards David in NZ

Lindsay Laurie March 12, 2019 at 7:15 PM G'day Connie … written so well and with a theme to hold interest. You certainly have a great writing gift Connie - thank you - Lindsay

Vladislav Raven March 11, 2019 at 11:15 AM Hi Connie, such beautiful gardens and such a beautiful poem that paints such strongly beautiful images into the mind.I like the form, you have used it well in this beautiful write. A Fave. have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX Connie Marcum Wong March 11, 2019 at 12:54 PM Thank you so much Mike. I spent the weekend with my little seven year old granddaughters. They are such a joy. You have a lovely week. Soon spring will be here. xxoo : )

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2019 at 6:40 PM Yes, I wonder if Jan T. is ok. I remember she was getting her house all ready for retirement. That was ten whole years ago!!

Paul Callus March 4, 2019 at 7:37 AM Keukenhoff Gardens are beautiful, and so is your poem, Connie (ably written in this lovely form). Regards // paul Connie Marcum Wong March 7, 2019 at 7:14 PM Thank you Paul. I really like Jan's form and have written several poems that are Alouettes. : ) xxoo

Robert Lindley March 3, 2019 at 9:22 AM A great delight to have found and read this bright morn, this superbly crafted poem my dear friend. A definite fav for me.. Connie Marcum Wong March 3, 2019 at 6:35 PM Thank you so much my dear friend. I so appreciate the fav! I have not been able to be here at PS for the past week and have missed reading a lot of wonderful poems. I am now caught up on your poetry posted Robert and I was inspired by your poetry to write my latest post I dedicated to you. Blessings, Connie : ) xxoo

Heidi Sands March 1, 2019 at 12:59 PM Congratulations for your win :)

Line Gauthier March 1, 2019 at 11:29 AM Back with more congrats, Connie.

Judy Ball February 28, 2019 at 1:07 PM Excellent as always Connie. Love the pic. Exceptional. God Bless, JB

Eve Roper February 26, 2019 at 12:16 AM Back with a big congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier February 25, 2019 at 2:47 PM Lovely, Connie. You did justice to the form. Congrats on your win.

Carolyn Devonshire February 25, 2019 at 1:19 PM How lovely this garden is, Connie, and your description is spot on! In the center, that even looks like a tulip tree. Your poem is uplifting and a joy to read. Hugs, carolyn Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2019 at 2:17 PM Thank you very much Carolyn. Both my daughters went with me and I have such fond memories from that trip. xxoo : )

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2019 at 2:41 AM - I grew up in a tulip garden .... my father loved tulips and was so proud of them - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2019 at 2:18 PM Thank you very much. It is such a beautiful place. Both my daughters went with me on that visit. : ) xxoo

Carol Mays February 23, 2019 at 11:33 PM So beautiful! Saved it as a favorite. Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2019 at 1:53 PM Oh thank you so much Carol. I really appreciate that. It is a stunni g place to visit. : ) xxoo

Eve Roper February 23, 2019 at 8:06 PM love the line, "tulips on parade"...beautiful imagery of the garden and it's surrounds my friend .. good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`* Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2019 at 2:22 PM Thank you Eve, I was very happy to make the list. : ) xxoo

Charlie Smith February 23, 2019 at 12:38 PM Lovely, I can hear the children sing... Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2019 at 2:24 PM Thank you Charlie. I taught the song to my children and grandchildren. : ) xxoo

Constance La France February 21, 2019 at 10:07 PM Connie, a lovely poem and an interesting form, I must give that a whirl ~ Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2019 at 2:25 PM Thank you Constance. Congratulations on your top win! : ) xxoo

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2019 at 8:21 PM You created a splendid example of that form. Gosh, Connie. I have not heard from our Jan Turner in YEARS. Remember all the creative forms she came up with?? She must be in her early 70's by now. Have you heard anything about her? Also, didn't you post your "feelings" poem? I was looking for it. Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2019 at 2:06 PM No, Jan is not at any place I know about. Perhaps she has health issues. I do enjoy writing in her Alouette form. Thank you Andrea. I put a few in the book I just made for my granddaughter. : ) xxoo

Robert L. Hinshaw February 20, 2019 at 12:37 PM Beautiful verse about a beautiful place. Vera and I visited there when I was assigned with the AF in Frankfurt Germany during the mid-60s. This will rate at the top of the winner's list for sure! Bob H Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2019 at 2:14 PM Well coming in fourth is fine with me Robert. I was very happy to make the winner's list. I am happy you liked it. : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit February 20, 2019 at 9:20 AM The form looks difficult to execute..but as always, your poem is beautiful like the photo you posted. Best for a win, Connie. Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2019 at 2:03 PM It is a simple form but you are right, it is more difficult because of the syllable restrictions. Thank you Vijay! : )

Heidi Sands February 20, 2019 at 8:09 AM Oh so beautiful! Thanks for sharing :)

Tom Cunningham February 20, 2019 at 5:25 AM Enjoyed your verse Connie, nothing beats a beautiful garden like the one you write about. Tom. Connie Marcum Wong February 25, 2019 at 2:00 PM So true Tom. It was heavenly. Thank you very much! xxoo ; )

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