Garden Storm

The garden is red and white, rows and rows.
Stars are golden amidst a midnight sky.
Ebon roses and gray, somnolent crows.
Shadows of statues pray; angels are nigh.
Disquiet thunder; silhouettes darken.
Lightning momentarily turns scene bright.
Storms might linger; lavish scent of garden.
Chiseled, cherub chins stone-faced, see the light.
Their faces askance with each brightening.
If angels could hide their faces and kneel -
Instead wings hover - under clouds’ twinkling.
The buds - no worse the wear for their ordeal.
Sentient prima donna by blithesome day;
Roses and halos become shadow play.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:56 AM
well done, Kim...not heard of this form...will check it out.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 12:41 PM
A sonnet with looser rules.
Gondolf Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 10:13 AM
A beautiful piece of poetry, Kim, I enjoyed the read. John
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 10:56 AM
Thank you so much for reading and comment. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 9:29 AM
What a wonderful write you have here. Have a lovely day writing away............
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 10:57 AM
Thank you, Paula! You too!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 9:09 AM
Lovely imagery. Great poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 10:57 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Rolland Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 8:20 AM
wonderful poem, this is both graceful and touching, thanks poet Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 10:58 AM
Thank you for the graceful and touching! <3
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 10:46 PM
Does hybronnet mean sonnet that is sometimes not exactly rhymed? For me it felt just like a sonnet should feel. Lovely imagery, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 5:24 AM
Yes, Andrea! It is a type of sonnet! Thank you! I enjoyed the challenge. Hugs
Smith  Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 9:12 PM
Lovely use of descriptive words.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 5:25 AM
I appreciate you! Thank you, Alison!
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 8:31 PM
Remarkable hybronnet, Kim. Especially like the closing couplet. ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 5:25 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon! I liked how those two lines shaped up. Hugs
Hind Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 7:35 PM
this is moving artwork, Kim!!...this is going to be haunting me for awhile, you did this form so well, it's amazing, Kim - a fav
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 5:26 AM
I so appreciate you, Paige! Hugs and thanks!
Jones Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 7:34 PM
As always full of lovely imagery and flawless rhymes Kim. Enjoyed.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 5:26 AM
I appreciate your comment! Hugs, Karen!
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