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Garden Shadows

Time bears signs to be indicating something sinister. Hence, the world sustains, as usual, oblivious finisher. An epoch passed; cannot heave it from the dead. Clocks implore us to stop, but time spurns us instead. We squander our youth, oblivious to times streaming. It walks on with ample reason and expanded despising. We set our rare sights on a spare mountain to challenge. Thus over time, what was once lucid, swivels scavenge. Time is the fruit of our ultimate sin in the Garden of Eden.  We were made to be rightfully everlasting and undying fun. Now comes the affliction that willingly made us heartless. Limit our divine destiny and assure us, in nothingness.
Written: November 21, 2021
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Skelly Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 3:04 AM
Very true, we do squander our youth never realizing the value of time..Delice
Ball Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Yes indeed. Live each moment as though it were your last --- It just might be. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Profound thoughts on the first garden ever, written with skill and beauty. Have a great week, Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 1:12 AM
The past is past. Think of the future.
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November 21, 2021 at 6:43 PM
If only our allotted time didn’t pass so fast, the time allocated for sins of the past. Imagine if Eve hadn’t bitten into forbidden fruit, what would life be? An enjoyable read Lasaad… Belle
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