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Garden of Nocturnal Delight a Collaboration With Shadow of the Past

Here in this garden of nocturnal delight lunar shadows dance on dew covered grass while mystical creatures hop between the delicate stems of swaying Gladiolus Wrapped only in silver rays of the moon we drift 'pon silken petals over lilac waters Two hearts speaking in signs to one rhythm yet, here in our garden of nocturnal delight it is in your eyes that I am lost Drawn deep into the forest of your affection by a soul that possesses a tenderness and beauty I never knew could exist; showing me a world I'd never seen A world where cherry blossom clouds dance across a diamond sky while emerald birds drink from a jade brook Lying here in the darkness with you in my arms tears fall as I hear ancient trees converse about coral butterflies whispering pastel greetings and beautiful stories of a splendid intimacy shared Written with Shadow of the past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/13/2018 8:33:00 PM
A beautiful romantic collaboration with Shadow that I enjoyed reading Edward! Awesome!~Che :)
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Edward Mccall
Date: 2/13/2018 10:59:00 PM
Hello Cheryl, thank you for such a sweet comment I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Shadow was such fun to write with she is very talented and so easy to work with. I will let her know of your kind comment Have a blessed evening, Edward. {:-)
Date: 2/4/2018 10:33:00 AM
I enjoyed this seamless collaboration. You two Write well together.
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Edward Mccall
Date: 2/4/2018 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Richard for your visit I'm glad you enjoyed it. May you have a blessed evening. Edward :-)
Date: 2/1/2018 9:53:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful and enchanting, I had a lovely time feeling and frolicking thru this poem! A Wow of a delight. All the best to you both, and your respective pens ... CayCay
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/2/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thanks so much CayCay :)
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Edward Mccall
Date: 2/1/2018 10:43:00 PM
Hello CayCay, thank you so much for such a lovely and uplifting comment. It's feed back like yours that fans the flames of creativity. I have let shadow know about your comment Have a blessed night CayCay.
Date: 1/29/2018 9:15:00 PM
The two of you write beautifully together. Very awesome write!
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/2/2018 2:37:00 PM
Thanks kindred spirit ;)
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/29/2018 10:38:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda for your kindness I will let Shadow know about your sweet comment. Have a wonderful night my dear soup friend.
Date: 1/29/2018 4:56:00 PM
what a wonderful collaboration with Shadow - your pens flow so beautifully together it is impossible to tell which poet wrote which stanzas:-) hugs jan xx
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/2/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thank you giggle queen!
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/29/2018 10:41:00 PM
Thank you Jan for such a beautiful comment. I couldn't believe how much her style matched mine on this collaboration she was a joy to write with.
Date: 1/29/2018 2:43:00 PM
Great collaboration Edward...
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/2/2018 2:41:00 PM
Hi S1. Thanks again :)
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/29/2018 10:42:00 PM
Thank you so very much Silent one for your kind words.
Date: 1/29/2018 2:34:00 PM
It was indeed my pleasure to take this journey of imaginations with you Sir Edward :)
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/29/2018 10:45:00 PM
Miss Shadow it was an honor and a privilege to share a page with you, thank you again for sharing your time and talent.
Date: 1/29/2018 2:19:00 PM
You written a beautiful, romantic poem..every word shines with feelings of loving hearts. A great creation! Kudos to you Edward, and Shadow of the past.
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/29/2018 10:48:00 PM
Hello Vijay, thank you for this beautiful comment your kind words of encouragement are greatly appreciated.
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Fj Thomas
Date: 1/29/2018 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Vijay :)

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