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Garden of Blooms

She is the flower in the garden of dreams Awaiting her butterfly on the summer breeze A sip of nectar where her beauty beams Kissing her petals with seductive tease Awaiting her butterfly on the summer breeze Fluttering to the rhythm of her heartbeat Kissing her petals with seductive tease Her fragrance alluring, ever so sweet Fluttering to the rhythm of her heartbeat A monarch in flight to her garden of blooms Her fragrance alluring, ever so sweet Basking in sunshine as her passion looms A monarch in flight to her garden of blooms A sip of nectar where her beauty beams Basking in sunshine as her passion looms She is the flower in the garden of dreams 11-23-2020 Pen a Pantoum Poetry Contest Sponsored by: D.W. Rodgers

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Date: 12/29/2020 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings.............
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Date: 12/28/2020 7:36:00 AM
Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win in the contest. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/27/2020 2:20:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 12/27/2020 1:37:00 PM
Joseph, Thanks for taking part in this contest. Your attention to meter and rhyme made it a smooth read and a deserving winner. Dave
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Joseph May
Date: 12/27/2020 7:40:00 PM
Thank you for my top placement DW
Date: 12/27/2020 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful, romantic pantoum. Congrats!
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Date: 12/1/2020 4:39:00 PM
I see this beauty was POTD. Big congrats, Joseph.
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Date: 12/1/2020 7:47:00 AM
Belated congrats for POTD on this beautiful piece Joseph! :) Linda
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:46:00 AM
Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
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Joseph May
Date: 11/27/2020 7:42:00 PM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 11/24/2020 8:54:00 PM
This is so beautiful and dreamy. Your thoughts belong drifting in the tenderness of the sky. Congratulations Joseph, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Joseph May
Date: 11/25/2020 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Brandy..hugs
Date: 11/24/2020 6:54:00 PM
A beautiful enchanting poem, congratulations on POTD Joe!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/25/2020 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Tania..
Date: 11/24/2020 6:30:00 PM
Great flow and imagery , Joseph, congratulations on POTD.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/25/2020 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Eve..
Date: 11/24/2020 5:02:00 PM
Simply beautiful and a big congrats on POTD...I love it!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/25/2020 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Akkina..
Date: 11/24/2020 3:11:00 PM
A beautiful Pantoum poem Joseph, one can picture the garden of dreams through the read... Congratulations on poem of the day, Belle
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Belle
Date: 11/24/2020 2:05:00 PM
absolutely delightful Pantoum Jospeh, congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Jan...hugs
Date: 11/24/2020 12:06:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD! Great poem and pantoum is always a bit challenging! warm images to hold on to during these cold season!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Krish
Date: 11/24/2020 11:42:00 AM
I love this Joseph! One of the loveliest Pantoums I have read in a very long time! Congratulations on having it honored as POTD. This beauty is going straight into my Faves. Blessings xxoo
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie, I appreciate that you are making it a fave..hugs
Date: 11/24/2020 10:49:00 AM
- A beautiful p.o.t.d. ... congratulations Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Anne..hugs
Date: 11/24/2020 10:27:00 AM
What a beautiful image Joseph - lovely pantoum. Until we rescued a butterfly we didn't have butterflies in our garden. Now they visit often. They are a joy. Congratulations on your POTD. Good luck in the contest if this is for the pantoum contest. Thanksgivings blessings to you!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:31:00 PM
Thank Sam, Thanksgiving Blessings to you as well
Date: 11/24/2020 9:31:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Joseph --- a 'flower in your garden!' Best wishes, Gershon
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Gershon
Date: 11/24/2020 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I love nature poems. Simon:)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Simon
Date: 11/24/2020 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Pantoums are not so easy to compose, and you have done a masterful job. Thanks for sharing.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Milton
Date: 11/24/2020 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "Wonderful" I am in your beautiful garden. I love butterflies. Enjoy your win..................
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula
Date: 11/24/2020 7:14:00 AM
Congratulation o your POTD. A poem on nature that is almost musical. ~~
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Victor
Date: 11/24/2020 6:16:00 AM
Each stanza could stand o its own...Congratulations Joseph May on POTD...Well done
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:22:00 PM
Thank you Arturo
Date: 11/24/2020 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD Joseph :)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:22:00 PM
Thank you Heidi..hugs
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