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Garden of Blooms

She is the flower in the garden of dreams
 Awaiting her butterfly on the summer breeze
 A sip of nectar where her beauty beams
 Kissing her petals with seductive tease

 Awaiting her butterfly on the summer breeze
 Fluttering to the rhythm of her heartbeat
  Kissing her petals with seductive tease
 Her fragrance alluring, ever so sweet

 Fluttering to the rhythm of her heartbeat
 A monarch in flight to her garden of blooms
 Her fragrance alluring, ever so sweet
 Basking in sunshine as her passion looms

 A monarch in flight to her garden of blooms
 A sip of nectar where her beauty beams
 Basking in sunshine as her passion looms
 She is the flower in the garden of dreams

 11-23-2020
 Pen a Pantoum Poetry Contest
 Sponsored by: D.W. Rodgers

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/29/2020 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings.............

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/28/2020 7:36:00 AM

Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win in the contest. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2020 2:20:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 12/27/2020 1:37:00 PM

Joseph, Thanks for taking part in this contest. Your attention to meter and rhyme made it a smooth read and a deserving winner. Dave

Joseph May
Date: 12/27/2020 7:40:00 PM

Thank you for my top placement DW

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/27/2020 9:50:00 AM

Beautiful, romantic pantoum. Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2020 4:39:00 PM

I see this beauty was POTD. Big congrats, Joseph.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/1/2020 7:47:00 AM

Belated congrats for POTD on this beautiful piece Joseph! :) Linda

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/27/2020 7:46:00 AM

Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis

Joseph May
Date: 11/27/2020 7:42:00 PM

Thank you Alexis

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/24/2020 8:54:00 PM

This is so beautiful and dreamy. Your thoughts belong drifting in the tenderness of the sky. Congratulations Joseph, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 11/25/2020 2:49:00 PM

Thank you Brandy..hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/24/2020 6:54:00 PM

A beautiful enchanting poem, congratulations on POTD Joe!

Joseph May
Date: 11/25/2020 2:48:00 PM

Thank you Tania..

Eve Roper

Date: 11/24/2020 6:30:00 PM

Great flow and imagery , Joseph, congratulations on POTD.

Joseph May
Date: 11/25/2020 2:48:00 PM

Thank you Eve..

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/24/2020 5:02:00 PM

Simply beautiful and a big congrats on POTD...I love it!

Joseph May
Date: 11/25/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Akkina..

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/24/2020 3:11:00 PM

A beautiful Pantoum poem Joseph, one can picture the garden of dreams through the read... Congratulations on poem of the day, Belle

Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:33:00 PM

Thank you so much Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 11/24/2020 2:05:00 PM

absolutely delightful Pantoum Jospeh, congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:23:00 PM

Thank you Jan...hugs

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 11/24/2020 12:06:00 PM

Congrats on your POTD! Great poem and pantoum is always a bit challenging! warm images to hold on to during these cold season!

Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:32:00 PM

Thank you Krish

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/24/2020 11:42:00 AM

I love this Joseph! One of the loveliest Pantoums I have read in a very long time! Congratulations on having it honored as POTD. This beauty is going straight into my Faves. Blessings xxoo

Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie, I appreciate that you are making it a fave..hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/24/2020 10:49:00 AM

- A beautiful p.o.t.d. ... congratulations Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:31:00 PM

Thank you Anne..hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/24/2020 10:27:00 AM

What a beautiful image Joseph - lovely pantoum. Until we rescued a butterfly we didn't have butterflies in our garden. Now they visit often. They are a joy. Congratulations on your POTD. Good luck in the contest if this is for the pantoum contest. Thanksgivings blessings to you!

Joseph May
Date: 11/24/2020 3:31:00 PM

Thank Sam, Thanksgiving Blessings to you as well