Garden Fruit

Today I picked the garden fruit,
To make complete a tasty meal;
And came across an aphid brute.
Today I picked the garden fruit,
Beside my house of holes and root;
To emphasis my scalloped veal.
Today I picked the garden fruit;
To make complete a tasty meal.

I cleared the vines of ripened crop,  
Then freed my back from painful stoop;
And took inside to finely chop.
I cleared the vines of ripened crop,
To later make some veggie soup;
And then I’ll go to bed and drop.
I cleared the vines of ripened crop;
Then freed my back from painful stoop.

Copyright © 2013  By Caryl S. Muzzey

First Place Winner ~ "Triolet" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Giorgio Veneto
Sept. 4, 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/3/2016 11:00:00 AM
I love reading triolets. This one is great!!! :)
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:42:00 PM
Hi Carly, congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 8/29/2013 3:11:00 AM
- Congratulations on a wonderful first place .... well deserved!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/27/2013 9:54:00 PM
Congrats on a very worthy win! Love the season visual descriptions.. very relatable.. hugs, Maggie Mae
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Date: 8/24/2013 7:44:00 PM
My hearty congratulations on your great win my dear friend Caryl! This is a great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing as well. Big hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 8/24/2013 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations, on the "Triolet". deep it is... thank you for the kind visit. SKAT
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Date: 8/23/2013 6:02:00 PM
A great triolet, Caryl. Congratulations on your no. 1. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/23/2013 1:47:00 PM
Tasty Triolet that you have penned..Great winning work.Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2013 1:40:00 PM
From one vegetable grower, to another......I "dig" this poem !! LOL !! You wrote a wonderful and fun piece!
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Date: 8/23/2013 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations.....Seren
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Date: 8/23/2013 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win
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Date: 8/23/2013 7:01:00 AM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 8/11/2013 8:24:00 AM
CUTE! CUTE! CUTE! Loved it... good luck! Big warm hugs xoxox
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Date: 8/10/2013 6:04:00 PM
this is SO cute. Everyone is doing better triolets than mine. I better go back to the drawing board!!!
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:53:00 PM
Cute take on the contest. I can relate to "painful stoop".lol..BG
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