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Garden Fairy Bright and Glary
Garden fairy bright and glary Your floral displays glow With velvet irises kisses Having you stood on tippy-toe Where glorious irises grow. *+*+*+* 24th May 2023 Mother Goose Grows Up Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley *+*+* Nursery rhyme chosen to grow up is… Mary, Mary Quite Contrary Mary, Mary, quite contrary How does your garden grow? With silver bells and cockleshells And pretty maids all in a row And pretty maids all in a row. *+*

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Date: 6/19/2023 8:50:00 AM
Very cute win Belle. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/7/2023 4:47:00 AM
Belle, congratulations on your win, beautiful !
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/7/2023 9:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Constance… Belle
Date: 6/5/2023 7:08:00 PM
This nice little parody reminded me of a nursery rhyme that is not often included, and that was good enough to win in my contest. Congrats!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/5/2023 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Miranda, I’m delighted with the placement and enjoyed writing for your contest… Belle
Date: 5/30/2023 9:48:00 AM
Hi my gifted eloquent poetess whom I am so happy to have crossed paths with, an inspiring member in our group and a wonderful children's story teller. Brilliant poetry Belle my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/30/2023 3:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer, it’s a delight to write poetic stories to be read to children or for them to read themselves. Hugs and blessings in return to you my dear friend… Belle
Date: 5/25/2023 6:39:00 PM
Very sweet Belle, so joyful, I love this <3
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/25/2023 6:42:00 PM
Bless you BJ and thank you… Belle
Date: 5/25/2023 8:01:00 AM
Nicely written Belle. Beautiful images in your words...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/25/2023 5:39:00 PM
Thank you Michael… Belle
Date: 5/24/2023 12:21:00 PM
- much joy in these lines ... as you play with the words ... I can almost see your smile ... lovely poem, Belle :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/24/2023 1:15:00 PM
Thank you kindly Anne-Lise, fairy tales and nursery rhymes do inspire a smile, love them and enjoy writing about them. Hugs in return, Belle
Date: 5/24/2023 11:52:00 AM
This is such a beautiful metaphorical poem, Belle. Your beautiful word choice and vivid pictures have left me in awe of your writing. Your literary skills have added even more splendor to something that was already rather lovely. I hope you have a lot of success in the contest.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/24/2023 1:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Sotto, I’m truly touched my your kind words. It’s a short nursery rhyme but I had a jolly good time writing these few lines. Bless you, Belle

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