Garden Diary


The moment winter softens into spring and all is melting, the first flower is the
white snowdrop poking through the snow, quickly followed by johnny-jump ups.
They are so cute and delicate in my patch of garden, they just pop up everywhere.
Here and there are bright patches of loveliness.

snowdrops touch my heart
jump ups where you least expect-
they say hello spring

And then come the drifts of bulbs planted in hopes last year.  The flocks of crocuses,
daffodils, and tulips all a pleasant mingling of color.  Some even grow on my lawn,
I blame the squirrels for that.  The whole garden is wild and dripping with flowers,
but just for awhile.  Those bulb beauties fade away as quickly as they came.

so fat and healthy
growing like musical notes-
so soon withering

Oh, the harmonious hues of summer, the painted daisies in their pretty dresses,
and the purple irises all fancy.  And near the back fence, the sweet yellow meadow
rue amongst the lace white lady's mantle.  Soon come the day lilies and the blue
phlox, and just beyond the fence a lilac tree brings lovely scents on the breeze.

such a pretty view
from my big kitchen window-
I look thoughtfully

Fall has come and the garden is beginning to fade.  It is a rough passage, cruel to
see the menacing weather confuse the flowers.  Oh, how they struggle to survive
the cold rain and frosty nights.  But the strong still bloom till the very end.
A single delicate rose is a gift to behold. And then the garden sleeps.

pushing the limits
each flower must fade in time-
garden memories

And under the snow the garden dreams. Beneath the earth it sleeps, as the winds
howl and drifts of snow cover everything white. They sleep.  And I also have dreams
for my garden.  I make plans for next year, for new flowers to plant among the old.
Winter is a time for dreaming, planning and wishing.

perhaps bell flowers
or maybe blue corn flowers-
oh shasta daisy

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October 29, 2015

Poetry/Haibun/Garden Diary
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:14:00 PM
Broken:) A nice and creative win. Love SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2015 3:17:00 PM
~Thank you Skat
Date: 11/27/2015 10:23:00 AM
BW, my wife would be right at home in your kitchen window. WOW, look at them gardens! Just a beautiful pen and kudos on the win.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/27/2015 3:56:00 PM
Dan thanks for visiting my poem, and for the beautiful ~
Date: 11/26/2015 9:40:00 PM
Wonderful pen Broken.. congrats on big win!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/27/2015 3:56:00 PM
Upma, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats ~
Date: 11/26/2015 3:11:00 PM
I just love the hopeful tone of this haibun. I bought a new house last year, so I planted my very first garden this past year. I have loved watching the flowers flourish with each season. I think in Canada our flowers are extra hardy ;) Congrats on your win! Your writing is simply lovely to read.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/26/2015 9:04:00 PM
Heather, thank you so much for the congrats and the nice comment, my mother was a wonderful gardener with a huge garden and I promised her I would always have a garden so I do my best.
Date: 11/26/2015 8:50:00 AM
So sweet flowery feelings you have spread. Congratulation B.O to win the contest Extra congratulation for your win on each n every contest. Anisha
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Constance La France
Date: 11/26/2015 9:06:00 AM
Aisha, thanks for visiting and the congrats
Date: 11/2/2015 8:45:00 PM
Excellent and overwhelming Do you actually maintain your garden ? Wish you best For the contest AnishaD
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Constance La France
Date: 11/3/2015 12:01:00 AM
Anisha, oh yes, it is a promise I made to my mother who was an avid gardener all her life, I would always have a garden even if it was small, thanks for the visit ~
Date: 10/29/2015 9:54:00 AM
I love gardens. Love your write.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2015 11:34:00 AM
Thank you James ~
Date: 10/29/2015 5:28:00 AM
A delightful read today, BW. I am entertained throughout and your modern haiku are rich in imagery as well as your prose. 7. All the best in the contest! hugs!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2015 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Kim for the nice comment and the 7 rating ~
Date: 10/29/2015 5:15:00 AM
Oh, BW... what a wonderful concept, to intersperse free verse with haiki. so this is haibun? My favs: 1st two lines of the last verse AND your johnny-jumps. They're so tiny and yet so brilliant and perfect. I wish I could give you a 10, but will ya settle for a 7? Into my favs!
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Date: 10/29/2015 8:17:00 AM
Oh Lin I love gardening, I inherited that love from my mother who had a huge garden, it was something we shared, those johnny jump ups are so sweet in the spring and thanks for the 7 ~
Date: 10/29/2015 3:27:00 AM
- Sounds like a beautiful garden all year round, B.W. - Full of beautiful flowers - A beautiful poem - (7) - Luck in contest ! - Best wishes for a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:02:00 AM
and the seven ~
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise for the visit and the nice comment ~
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