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Garden Days

I sit; dog snoozes; bees parade In, out, in, over, under flowers Buzz-ZIP! with pace and poise and purpose A hum of bees spell us to sleep. Written on 5th July 2021 Submitted for Workshop: Adjectives Deleted Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jack Webster

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Date: 5/26/2025 4:19:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/12/2021 2:16:00 AM
Beautiful creation. Congratulations!
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