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Garbage

The light of his eyes are growing dim 
He creaks across the hard floor 
A mouth so large it holds a ton
No longer remains doors

Leaks and drips sometimes pour out fast
Loud noises as dinosaurs
But that mouth scoops up rank garbage 
It's as if an amour

Soon retirement in the picture
He doesn't want to be junked
That yellow John Deere loader
Man! A great machine hunk 

Every week day he is so busy
He doesn't want to rest
Up and going at six in the morn
That is when he does best

He's seen those loader graveyards
on the way to be repaired
If only they would oil and grease
him as if they did cared

He has been faithful to do his job
Even though neglected
Tears run down his radiator
His metal is affected

Sad to see the death of such a one
it pains to see him go
But life is short even in service
The graveyard such a blow

Inspired by contest:Garbage
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Horne Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 2:05 PM
love this thoughtful write
Rycroft Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 4:08 PM
A very good personification well thought of great poem x
Ball Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Love the way you bring such personalty to this big machine. Reminds me of an old red truck my husband drove when our girls were growing up. That old red Ford truck lasted until the two oldest were grown and married. When he finally traded t for a new one the girls cried and said it was like losing a family member. Great job. Well Done A seven fro me. God Bless, JB
Kendrick Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 5:16 AM
Yes, a man's truck becomes part of him..One can recognize a man when they see the truck driving down the road..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Chansarkar Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Life of a garbage tractor!very well written Sara!
Horsman Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Wow this is so different, got to be a winner, hope so!
Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Well, maybe different will be good but sometimes people like old and boring..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Goff Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Sara, great personification! jim
Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Glad that you like the personification..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 7:30 PM
this is really captivating,deep, sara... i like how you interpreted the theme!... huggs
Y. Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Hi Sara, This piece was so well written and creative. The Garbage contest inspired you to good write. A Big seven:-) Alexis
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Terrific Sara. You brought the tractor to life. I didnt know tractors had tears;-)
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