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Gaping Hole - Bt

Blue soul whispers nightmare toll on ice cold pier stroll Date created and submitted : 3rd January 2031 Contest : Bauk Than - Than Bauk Sponsor : Charles Messina NB This is a story of grief and loss. Sensible language is a requirement for this contest. My submission has been verified by Poetry Soup Grammar Checker and Syllable Counter. Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 4 4 4 Total # Syllables: 12 Grammar Checker Report Grammar Mistakes No embarrassing grammar mistakes found. Congrats! Spelling Errors No spelling mistakes found. Congrats! Clichés No clichés found. Congrats! Word Choice No Poor Word Choices Found. Congrats

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Date: 2/17/2021 5:12:00 AM
Wow! Had to reread several times to get the affect! Worth it! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:32:00 PM
Nicely done, Howard. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2021 4:43:00 AM
Way to go. Enjoyed reading your icy stroll. Thanks for dropping by my page with congrats. Sara
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