Gaping Hole - Bt
Blue soul whispers
nightmare toll on
ice cold pier stroll
Date created and submitted : 3rd January 2031
Contest : Bauk Than - Than Bauk
Sponsor : Charles Messina
NB This is a story of grief and loss.
Sensible language is a requirement for this contest.
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Syllables Per Line: 4 4 4
Total # Syllables: 12
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Copyright © Howard Kerr | Year Posted 2021
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