Gambling On Love

Young couples every day
Falling in love
Casting their dice
Hoping for the best

Vying for true love
Trusting their hunch
In the love lottery
Crossing their fingers

Hanging a rabbit foot
Throw it all on a gamble
Never crossing their mind
To have the conversation...

And ask what’s meaningful
What’s important to you?
What do you believe in?
What do you want from life?



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

confidencehopelifelovepassionfree verse

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Gershon Wolf

February 7, 2019 at 10:04 PM

Well, looking for the good in young people -- They're better than our generation, aren't they? After all, they don't have sex first and then (maybe) ask each other's name. LOL. (Remember that? -- even if you and I didn't indulge, we knew it was going on, … BIGTIME where I was, anyway. Ugh!) At any rate, you are sure right that they often don't find out the important stuff, but what good would it actually do? -- "Love is blind" has been around forever... Stimulating write!

Line Gauthier

February 7, 2019 at 11:06 PM

Thanks for your most entertaining comment, Gershon, and the mini excursion down memory lane. I'm not confessing to anything. LOL ... In comparison, this generation is totally brilliant - living with mom and dad till the age of 40 - a relationship would only get in the way of a good thing. On the other hand, the way I remember things we couldn't wait to escape.

M. L. Kiser

February 7, 2019 at 2:19 PM

Questions we must all ponder as we go through our days; well done.

Line Gauthier

February 7, 2019 at 10:58 PM

Thanks, ML, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger

February 7, 2019 at 4:34 AM

Weirdly enough, the people I know who have been married the longest, were married young, but they had the courage to communicate, and figure out each other before they married. The youngest seem to be the bravest when it comes to sharing their hopes, dreams, thoughts, and their truth. Your poem reminded me of this and made me smile, Line.

Line Gauthier

February 7, 2019 at 8:22 AM

That is wonderful when couples make it work. Luck only goes so far. Thanks for your uplifting comment, Caren.