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'Grandpa'--image from poetess' personal scrapbook

Poem submitted to “Beach” poetry contest, Rob Carmack, sponsor, April 26, 2026

 

GALVESTON BEACH

Galveston beach and its gentle mornings
glimmered through my girlhood,
warm waves wrapping my ankles
as I searched the sand for treasures~
smooth shells and shy sand dollars,
.
In the distance, my parents’ voice drifted~
the sea breeze carrying them
easy and unhurried,
as if time itself was 
softened by the sea.

the salt-sweet air carried a type of comfort, 
the quiet kind that 
settled softly into my childhood bones~
a warmth brushed with sea-spray
and sun-soaked breezes,  
the kind that tasted of tide-mist
and felt like home on my skin.

in a way, Galveston is home~
its tide once touching 
my great-grandfather’s boots
as he arrived in America, 
hopeful and unanchored
fresh from the old world, 
finding his first foothold 
in the new world. 

and I carry him with me still~
his courage like a quiet current
beneath my days,
his journey echoing 
in every shoreline breath,
reminding me that I, too,
am shaped by the sea 
that welcomed him.
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Hind Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:28 PM
this is very nostalgic, leads your feelings in like the sea <3
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 4:34 AM
The places our family’s been, indeed feels like home. Nice write!
George Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 2:07 AM
Lovely poem with beautiful alliteration wafting the sea breeze of nostalgia. Thus your grandfather found his first foot hold in the new world. So many may have a similar story to tell as America's population consists mostly of immigrants from Europe and also from other countries and continents.... a vast mosaic of cultures. Galveston, the island in the coast of Texas, is a great place famous for its beaches and I believe, is close to the place where you live.
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 8:20 PM
Whoa! My great-great grandmother on my mother's side came to Galveston in 1840... When I talked to my grandmother Ada, 1896 - 1992, she would tell me how her mother remembered Reconstruction in Texas in the 1870's -- or rather, the lack thereof. I'll leave it to your imagination as to what her opinion of African Americans was. Small world, gw
Jones Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 7:49 PM
Enjoyed reading your precious memory write. Felt like I visited and saw with your eyes. Love the photo and best wishes for a win!
Gauthier Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 5:59 PM
lovely family heirloom of a poem ~
Edmonds  Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 1:27 PM
Dear Sara, the warmth of your family shows through your poetry. A lovely alliteration, enjoyed the read… Beryl
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