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Galactic Dance

Galactic flashes pulse rainbow bold bright neon waves flow into black holes. Shooting stars ricochet through night skies rings of Saturn cut loose and rise. Drifting Sun sidesteps off center stage Mercury blazes white hot, then fades. Fat old Neptune looks bored and pouts poor little Pluto wanders in and out. Venus fusses, preoccupied with her looks Mars tries too hard, Earth gets him off the hook. Jupiter two steps, Uranus tries to prance at the first ever annual Galaxy Dance. Written on 8/25/2016

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Date: 2/20/2018 10:49:00 PM
Love this one!
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Date: 9/21/2016 10:33:00 AM
What a fabulous idea, bright a beautiful imagination you have Laura, congrats too, warm regards, Laura Hay
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Date: 9/18/2016 4:15:00 PM
Quite a dance you describe here, Laura! I love it and how cleverly you addressed the theme. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/18/2016 4:35:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra! It was fun writing it. Sometimes my mind runs in a fanciful way :)
Date: 9/18/2016 1:58:00 PM
Hi Laura! nice poem! congrats on 3rd place in my contest and thanks for your entry. Chris.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/18/2016 3:13:00 PM
Hi Chris! Thank you for my placement in your great contest! I'm glad you liked it, and my sense of humor, too :)
Date: 9/3/2016 12:34:00 PM
Nice one.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/3/2016 3:11:00 PM
Thanks, Kai :)
Date: 8/27/2016 4:27:00 AM
Loved it!! So cleverly thought out, Laura, and very ably constructed - A seven for originality! My very best regards to you, Laura...And my warmest wishes as always. :) john
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/29/2016 9:03:00 PM
Thanks, John! I'm glad you like it :)

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