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Gairjeen

It's the place called peace a canopy of green from mans un-baring sun there no fear....here. Its the place l close my eyes and l just....listen its a place to go to and let the rain on leaves just ...glisten chorus its full of senses its full of life so l'll sit a while and let it talk. Its a place that has much to say l'll softly walk its way emerald green reflected eyes his fallen one, i'm hidden....from his lies so lets stay a while lets play like the child his promised harmony, no wars, .....just mild A place of peace it's love will never cease a place ....so peaceful sit back, its time to mull come with me, come and .... see it's really not that far bathe in its love when then he says, enough.... enough. chorus its full of senses, its full of life l'll sit a while and let it talk. Bridge come with me open eyes and ..see it's gar-jeen and its emerald green Gairdin is Gaelic for Garden pronounced..gar-jeen or gairjeen or gawr-jeen

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Date: 6/18/2025 5:54:00 PM
Beautiful. Like the use of Gairdin. There is an old Irish Gaelic song called Gary Owen which is the anglicized version of Owens Garden
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 6/18/2025 11:44:00 PM
l didnt know that, l'll have to look it up. thanks for comment Oliver. J.
Date: 6/16/2025 5:59:00 AM
We'd love to hear you sing it
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 6/16/2025 12:50:00 PM
lol..i'm no good at writing or singing melodic rhythm , but anyone else is free to try. J

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