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the past ; history the future ; a mystery live in H I S PRESENCE

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/24/2011 4:47:00 AM

Great and powerful haiku! It cut me to the core. Happy holidays and I'll be looking forward to chatting with you someday. You are a sweet, insightful person and will always be close to my heart. ^.^ May God be comfortingly present throughout your recovery. Always, Laura

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/21/2010 4:40:00 PM

it is a mystery, and so much fun to try and find out. i've been thinking.i believe that you were a lost brother that i have never met until a while after. some yrs before the end of something.i can't say what time, but it is hidden.for all we know, time has secrets.it doesn't just stay in one place as it is said to do.if you know what i mean. much love to you. have a great day. i love your poem.(: -Always&Forever Lynn