G-A-P-S

True meaning, the true Universe Beyond all masquerades and interpretations Is hiding in solitude Lingering playfully in the quiet mind Consisting of... The gaps between stars On a cold, clear December night And you, awestruck Transfixed by myriad stars and nebulae Oblivious to the gaps, The binding nothingness in between In which the true Universe remains unseen.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/15/2024 2:59:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 12:29:00 PM

COMMON, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 12:36:00 PM

EPIC WRITE, COMMON, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**