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Futile Fragments - Linda Marie -

"Futile Fragments" ( A collaboration~ Linda-Marie P.S. sweetheart ) by~ LINDA MARIE *p.s. SWEETHEART shattered to inner core emotions reside in vogue as tattered tapestry etches death to vibrant vase egotistical desires ejected common sense to rogue fine ... adieu ... departure in the misty vague haze ... fragmented fragile pieces exploded with destruction simulation created to ebony volcanic ash love vacated unceremoniously scans of interruption emotions sustain tremors of immature backlash ... enchanting charms reflecting the pain of sheer intense to resurrect romance is a haunting dream of death provoking passions escalate chaos ... havoc ... suspense suffocation dwelling to captivate life's bated breath ... bittersweet faded memories succumb to shadowed jest ... by~ POET D: Moshing fragments overlooked, a darker dance limitless conventional Gothic hearings..... praising the sewer that runs analysis running ticking with the passion of an atomic bomb the perceived exotic unity of this frightens world~ shadow dust lashing out tropical grasses and utilities . . . tampering every hell Burning paper that represents hostile . . . black ashes results of a detailed creature mourning the abyss examination of falsification~ fragments that crawl in our inner walls A poisonous micro-fragment is presented approaching objective with the exploration of breakage . . . virus. . . patterns meaning destroying every awakening stage in this bio world *via~ wide Deep identification losing all Revelations, Laughing fading away with the criteria formed must we ~ need us~ crawling in my inner walls. . . use me ~ need me~ feed me~ critically re-evaluate me . . . A Collaboration with * Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of Poetry Soup RIP ~A Poet Destroyer COLLABORATION~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2016 10:59:00 PM
beautiful **SKAT**
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:18:00 AM
you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!
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Date: 8/27/2011 5:07:00 PM
well I still think our collab is tops PD my BFF... the emotion is undeniable and incredible.. thankxx for your expertise my BFF...luv..
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Date: 8/14/2011 5:54:00 PM
of course one of my very favorites too..oh yes...
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Date: 7/21/2011 2:19:00 PM
It's been entertaining reading your joint creative efforts. Caryl
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Date: 7/21/2011 10:22:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the words which flowed from your pens today P.D. and Linda-Marie. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:57:00 AM
Especially like the line that says praising the sewer that runs...That is a thought process opener...Interesting ...Thanks for the kind review of my work..I am just being stressed out a good bit..Will soup you..Sara
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Date: 7/21/2011 8:27:00 AM
You both have lots going on here. This poem reads extremely fast and has a bursting of emotions. I thank you both for reading my works, God bless, JancarlC.
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Date: 7/21/2011 5:39:00 AM
I have already read this one on Linda-Maries profile ... I really like the collaboration done in this poem well done to you both and nice to read you again long time no read lol love Jayne
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Date: 7/21/2011 4:05:00 AM
this was an awesome and emotional write my friends..you guys are a great team,, Pd I sent you mine again :)
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Date: 7/20/2011 10:12:00 PM
oh wow!! This sure is something-- wow you two definitely worked this quite well-- way to go for you two! Umm aha! pd! So I can go overboard with my lines-- I am still playing with the thoughts on mine though-- heehee hopefully I can post it within the day :D
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Date: 7/20/2011 10:03:00 PM
gosh, it seems to be written by one and the same poet! You matched her really well, PD!! how are you gonna judge this one?
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:35:00 PM
This is really a very cool and creative piece my friend however like I said before I think it may be a bit too deep for my poor little mind to fathom. I felt Linda's part was dealing with personal emotional trials while this part seems to deal with something else but I'm not quite sure how to express it. I do like it though. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:24:00 PM
interesting choice of words, like badgers smiles n humming birds, beguiling....im smiling:) great verse babe's xo, Don
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:01:00 PM
looking very good .. PD. my BFF ... reading like a charm .. an excellent collab..we should do again sometime..thankxx for adding flavor and spice to my words above... luv it my friend.. impressive piece ..your BFF forever ...
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Date: 7/20/2011 8:04:00 PM
am in awe PD my BFF .. an excellent ending.. depth and determination in these lines.. we work wonderfully well together ..yes? and an exciting composition for the competition.. thankxx luv..it is super impressive and intense..just the way I luv it.. your BFF ..in poetry too..
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:48:00 PM
sorry i could not keep the rhyme pattern Linda,, my mind took me down another road...
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:47:00 PM
ooooo! Linda, wanted to play hard ball...lol.. this was crazy for me.. i hope i pulled it off. ONE thing is for sure I had fun here. I think all i did was ramble out thoughts.. thank you LINDA this was so much fun... and crazy deep....p.d.
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