Fury

Fury
powers
tornadoes of emotions,
twisting mind and soul
into 
forces of ugliness,
which destroys the 
existence of 
ourselves



15 August 2020

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Date: 11/18/2020 5:58:00 AM
Right on emilia.only people can make so much pain.take care. Simon:)
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Emilia James
Date: 11/27/2020 1:50:00 AM
Indeed they can and do, thank you for reading and your comment, take care, Emilia : )
Date: 9/3/2020 4:05:00 AM
Right On the head. Love this gem. It's like we eat ourselves to pieces. I get it, right through my heart. Panagiota xx
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Date: 9/3/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you Panagiota, I have seen totally different sides to people that have let anger and bitterness overcome them to a point they are not the same person anymore. Emilia xx
Date: 8/29/2020 6:57:00 AM
Nice use of metaphor and imagery comparing tornadoes and emotion. I'm sure you are already aware of things I may write in my comments. Please, forgive me if so. I find it helpful to review various aspects of writing such as googling subjects such as poetic devices and of course the use of a thesaurus, dictionary and rhyming dictionary as resources.
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Date: 9/1/2020 3:21:00 AM
Thank you James, Please feel free to all you wish, I may not always be aware and I am very keen to learn and see things from a different angle so any information given is most welcomed. Emilia : )
Date: 8/28/2020 1:21:00 PM
This reads like a tornado and a hurricane.
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Date: 8/25/2020 8:42:00 PM
Nicely composed.Good Job. Blessing
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Date: 8/27/2020 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Anisha : ) Kind Regards Emilia x
Date: 8/16/2020 9:02:00 AM
For sure; what we feel, put out...is what returns personified. Well said!
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Date: 8/19/2020 4:37:00 AM
Thank you Joe for your comment. Regards Emilia
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