Fury

Fury powers tornadoes of emotions, twisting mind and soul into forces of ugliness, which destroys the existence of ourselves 15 August 2020

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Simon Hamill

Date: 11/18/2020 5:58:00 AM

Right on emilia.only people can make so much pain.take care. Simon:)

Emilia James
Date: 11/27/2020 1:50:00 AM

Indeed they can and do, thank you for reading and your comment, take care, Emilia : )

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/3/2020 4:05:00 AM

Right On the head. Love this gem. It's like we eat ourselves to pieces. I get it, right through my heart. Panagiota xx

Emilia James
Date: 9/3/2020 5:02:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota, I have seen totally different sides to people that have let anger and bitterness overcome them to a point they are not the same person anymore. Emilia xx

James Inman

Date: 8/29/2020 6:57:00 AM

Nice use of metaphor and imagery comparing tornadoes and emotion. I'm sure you are already aware of things I may write in my comments. Please, forgive me if so. I find it helpful to review various aspects of writing such as googling subjects such as poetic devices and of course the use of a thesaurus, dictionary and rhyming dictionary as resources.

Emilia James
Date: 9/1/2020 3:21:00 AM

Thank you James, Please feel free to all you wish, I may not always be aware and I am very keen to learn and see things from a different angle so any information given is most welcomed. Emilia : )