Joseph May Poet Pantoum

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Furry Rider

I'm cruising, watching cars go by
 Speeding down the highway, such a treat
 Wind on my fur, I feel I can fly,
 I've got dibs on the window seat

 Speeding down the highway, such a treat
 I'm a dog who loves a car ride!
 I've got dibs on the window seat
 I see my pitbull pal, her eyes open wide


I'm a dog who loves a car ride!
I'm filled with glee, loving the scene
 I see my pitbull pal, her eyes open wide
I'm a canine with a gangsta lean

 I'm filled with glee, loving the scene
 Wind on my fur, I feel I can fly
 I'm a canine with a gangsta lean
 I'm cruising, watching cars go by

 5-17-2020
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Eve Roper June 14, 2020 at 4:47 PM Joseph, Furry Rider, was enjoyable to read with perfect rhyme and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Joseph May June 14, 2020 at 6:54 PM Thank you for my placement Eve

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2020 at 5:58 PM so whimsical and fun this is. I too want to do the dog picture. WAs going to work on it maybe this afternoon out on my deck! you did awesome with this, Joseph. Joseph May June 14, 2020 at 6:56 PM Thank you Andrea

Jennifer Proxenos May 23, 2020 at 12:09 PM So warm and cute I almost want to reach out and cuddle that furry rider - i would say this is certainly a winner Joseph. Blessings, Jennifer. Joseph May June 14, 2020 at 6:55 PM Thank you Jennifer

Judy Ball May 19, 2020 at 2:40 AM Too cute Joseph. Dog lover that I am I love this and you got the picture just right. You made me smile with this. God Bless and stay well, Good luck in the contest. JB Joseph May May 19, 2020 at 7:29 AM Thank you Judy, glad I made you smile..

Brandy Nicole May 18, 2020 at 8:55 PM I love everything about this. "I've got dibs on the window seat" Oh yes!!! I'm right there with ya. This is cute, clever and so creative. I am smiling. : ) Brandy Joseph May May 19, 2020 at 7:28 AM Thank you Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong May 18, 2020 at 4:03 AM "I'm a canine with a gangsta lean" best line ever! I loved your poem Joseph. I hope to see this as a top winner my friend. Blessings xxoo Joseph May May 18, 2020 at 1:38 PM Glad you like that line Connie, Thank you for your Comments

Swetha Vangaveti May 18, 2020 at 3:35 AM Woah!!! Wonderfully depicted the feelings of a doggy on ride!!! Great!! Joseph May May 18, 2020 at 1:38 PM Thank you Swetha

Nette Onclaud May 17, 2020 at 6:27 PM adorable, joseph!..you make me cry; my doggie just passed away yesterday!...huggs and SOUPIE MAIL! Joseph May May 17, 2020 at 8:05 PM Thanks Nette, so sorry to hear that your dog died.

Jan Allison May 17, 2020 at 1:37 PM absolutely charming interpretation of the image I LOVE it Joseph, not seen the contest details yet but I do enjoy the pantoum form, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Joseph May May 17, 2020 at 5:16 PM Thank you Jan, hugs

Silent One May 17, 2020 at 10:00 AM I've not seen the photo but I can see it through your words... Joseph May May 17, 2020 at 11:30 AM Thank you Silent One