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I'm cruising, watching cars go by Speeding down the highway, such a treat Wind on my fur, I feel I can fly, I've got dibs on the window seat Speeding down the highway, such a treat I'm a dog who loves a car ride! I've got dibs on the window seat I see my pitbull pal, her eyes open wide I'm a dog who loves a car ride! I'm filled with glee, loving the scene I see my pitbull pal, her eyes open wide I'm a canine with a gangsta lean I'm filled with glee, loving the scene Wind on my fur, I feel I can fly I'm a canine with a gangsta lean I'm cruising, watching cars go by 5-17-2020 Photo 2

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2020 4:47:00 PM

Joseph, Furry Rider, was enjoyable to read with perfect rhyme and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Joseph May
Date: 6/14/2020 6:54:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2020 5:58:00 PM

so whimsical and fun this is. I too want to do the dog picture. WAs going to work on it maybe this afternoon out on my deck! you did awesome with this, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 6/14/2020 6:56:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/23/2020 12:09:00 PM

So warm and cute I almost want to reach out and cuddle that furry rider - i would say this is certainly a winner Joseph. Blessings, Jennifer.

Joseph May
Date: 6/14/2020 6:55:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer

Judy Ball

Date: 5/19/2020 2:40:00 AM

Too cute Joseph. Dog lover that I am I love this and you got the picture just right. You made me smile with this. God Bless and stay well, Good luck in the contest. JB

Joseph May
Date: 5/19/2020 7:29:00 AM

Thank you Judy, glad I made you smile..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/18/2020 8:55:00 PM

I love everything about this. "I've got dibs on the window seat" Oh yes!!! I'm right there with ya. This is cute, clever and so creative. I am smiling. : ) Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 5/19/2020 7:28:00 AM

Thank you Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/18/2020 4:03:00 AM

"I'm a canine with a gangsta lean" best line ever! I loved your poem Joseph. I hope to see this as a top winner my friend. Blessings xxoo

Joseph May
Date: 5/18/2020 1:38:00 PM

Glad you like that line Connie, Thank you for your Comments

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/18/2020 3:35:00 AM

Woah!!! Wonderfully depicted the feelings of a doggy on ride!!! Great!!

Joseph May
Date: 5/18/2020 1:38:00 PM

Thank you Swetha

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/17/2020 6:27:00 PM

adorable, joseph!..you make me cry; my doggie just passed away yesterday!...huggs and SOUPIE MAIL!

Joseph May
Date: 5/17/2020 8:05:00 PM

Thanks Nette, so sorry to hear that your dog died.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2020 1:37:00 PM

absolutely charming interpretation of the image I LOVE it Joseph, not seen the contest details yet but I do enjoy the pantoum form, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 5/17/2020 5:16:00 PM

Thank you Jan, hugs

Silent One

Date: 5/17/2020 10:00:00 AM

I've not seen the photo but I can see it through your words...

Joseph May
Date: 5/17/2020 11:30:00 AM

Thank you Silent One