George Aul Poet Dodoitsu

Funshine - George - Jessica

How can such a growing one

have my life shine like the sun?

Your wonder and constant run...

make all my days fun.



For "Magnet Marvel" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie.

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 14, 2011 at 5:42 AM Congratulations on your win George in Linda-Marie's contest "Magnet Marvel". Love, Carol

Robert Pettit March 13, 2011 at 6:57 PM Congratulations on winning in the contest. Way to go, George.

John Freeman March 13, 2011 at 1:28 PM Great to see you at the top George with this honorable win in eighth place. Congratulations on your honored win. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels March 12, 2011 at 1:31 PM Really beautiful George, congratulations on your win in the contest ;)

Kash Poet March 12, 2011 at 7:40 AM Beautiful poem!Congrats George on your well deserved win!--kashinath

Harry Horsman March 11, 2011 at 11:52 PM fun and sun shine, excellent, congrats. Harry

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2011 at 10:27 PM Congratulations, George, The ones for kids are among my faves!

Joyce Johnson March 11, 2011 at 7:55 PM Many more happy days with your loved one. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta March 11, 2011 at 6:53 PM Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Linda, george

Sara Kendrick March 11, 2011 at 4:05 PM Congratulations..Sara

Michael J. Falotico March 11, 2011 at 3:41 PM Congrats George on well deserved win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 11, 2011 at 3:04 PM Congrats George on your success in my magnet contest with these stunning words so sweet.. thankxx for your support luv..

Carolyn Devonshire March 10, 2011 at 12:14 PM Is this about your daughter, George? It's a lovely description of the joy she brings to your life. Best wishes for success in the "Magnet Marvel" contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 10, 2011 at 9:15 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest George.. good luck ... reading fully at judging time.. so as to totally enjoy luv..

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2011 at 11:47 PM I never found the run part much fun, but boy, could my kids run! I am thinking this is about a daughter? It's a cute one with a cute funshine title.

Sara Kendrick March 9, 2011 at 2:48 PM Enjoyed reading your Dodoitsu..Good luck in the contest with this sure win..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Your presence was so uplifting..Sara