Funny Wishes

Climb and jump trees, thou fish. Swim with your fins, thou monkey. Is a great fun to have such wish! How time turned up risk so funky.

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/10/2022 7:41:00 PM

Delightfully funny. You turn the reader's expectations upside down. Monkeys with fins - very imaginative! I enjoyed your posting. Best wishes from Canada. Be well. Brian

Olabosoye Wemimo Olaoluwa
Date: 10/10/2022 9:47:00 PM

That's the beauty of poetry which makes it to be ever new in different context depending on readers' openness to relate. I must say, u digested the context. Thanks for reading through dear sir

Julie Rodeheaver

Date: 9/10/2022 3:53:00 PM

LOL I got a laugh out of this one. Must be a parallel universe you speak of here. One where monkeys act like fish and fish act like monkeys. This poem truly was fun to read. :)

Olabosoye Wemimo Olaoluwa
Date: 9/10/2022 9:48:00 PM

Lots of craziness is happening on earth where the rich act poorly and the poor act richly. Isn't that funny a wish cum tease? Thanks for the compliment dear friend. I am humbled with regards