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Funny, What You Think Is Love

You tell her
that you love her
and you're kissing someone new
on the sly
while she's waiting
for you to come home.

You tell her
that you love her
yet your words and deeds
tell a different story.
First things first,
start with loving yourself

You told her
that you loved her
only to flee
when the going got tough
running off with your mistress
waiting in the wings

So much for...
for better or worse
Funny, what you think...
is love.


Submitted for...
Strand Choice J,Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest  (Winner: Honorable Mention)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand  
Date written: 03/17/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kauffman Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 11:46 PM
Well said, my friend. Timely lessons in morals and ethics. Congratulations Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 9:38 AM
Thank you very much, Sam:-)
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 5:05 PM
So true and so well said, Edward--a winning poem you wrote.
Ibeh Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 7:46 PM
Thank you, Vijay. I'm hoping for a HM at least!:-)
Adams Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 3:54 PM
so true for some... I never got this side of people...I mean if you aren't happy at home why not walk away instead of the selfish double life...is it greed? some want all they can get? afraid to lose money that comes with divorce? good write Edward! hugs
Ibeh Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Sandra:-) People are like jigsaw puzzles. One half easy to solve, the other half leave you flummoxed looking for pieces to complete them, teeheehee!
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