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Funny Tale About Three Kids

Once upon a time, there lived three friends: Doubtodore, Baggie, and Scaredson. Doubtodore: He didn’t believe anything Baggie or Scaredson told him; he not only doubted his friends, he also doubted the date he was born, or the name he was first given, “Peter”, by his parents. They had to change it, and nickname him “Doubtodore”. He also doubted that he lived with his real parents! Baggie: His hands could not resist the temptation of carrying everything he met on his way; he carried sticks, stones, pebbles, candy……. anything his hands could grasp. One day he carried a frog, thinking that it was a sponge – he almost jumped to the ceiling when the “sponge” sounded “Rrrrribit! Rrrribit! Rrrrrribit!” in his pocket. He quickly removed his trousers, as though they had a hot coal in them. The habit of carrying anything he saw won him the nickname “Baggie”. Scaredson: He was afraid of dark places, small places, the night and people who were taller than him; he was also afraid of trees’ shadows in the day! One night as he slept, a ball rolled into his bedroom; it was his favorite cat, Tom, playing with the ball. As Tom raced after the ball, he accidentally hit a rocking chair with his tail – this made the chair to rock gently. Hearing the rocking sound, Scaredson opened his eyes and slowly turned his head towards the rocking chair. “Ghost! Ghost! Ghost!” he cried out. As fasts as lighting, the ten year-old boy hid under his bed until when the sun rose. To mock his trivial fears, his father changed his name from “Sammy” to “Scaredson”. “I don’t want to have a scared son!” his father always muttered, even when his head was hidden by a newspaper. Cats, dogs and strangers knew the three friends very well….. Date Published: 10/8/2015

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Date: 7/27/2016 10:44:00 AM
Congrats on your beautoful win my friend. A 7, bl
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/27/2016 2:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, BL!! :-)
Date: 7/26/2016 1:36:00 PM
This was a fun read that I think my g.daughter will enjoy. Congratulations on your second place win Teddy. I enjoyed it! 7 ; )
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/27/2016 6:42:00 AM
Lolest, I'm sure she would!! Thanks so much Connie, for your applause, and enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 7/26/2016 9:55:00 AM
A 7 for these character sketches, Teddy! Congrats on your win. The stanza about the scared son reminded me of the show "Monk"--about a brilliant detective who's scared of things like MILK! Janice
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/27/2016 6:39:00 AM
Hehehe. I would love to watch "Monk"!!! Thank you so much Janice, for your applause, and enjoying my piece!! ;-)
Date: 7/26/2016 8:04:00 AM
What a delightful tale, the type of read where I'd like to read even more about those characters. Congratulations!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/27/2016 6:30:00 AM
Hi Dineen. Thank you for passing by to read and applaud my work!! *^_^*
Date: 7/25/2016 4:52:00 PM
Teddy,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/26/2016 1:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat, for your kind applause!! *^_^*

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