Funny Lookin' Creature With a Squeaky Bark

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I looked behind me when I heard a squeaky little bark
From out of the bushes, a kangaroo-looking creature rose
His bright green eyes flashed neon signs at me in the dark,
then he raised his long piggy snout and struck a silly pose.

"Have you escaped from the zoo to wander in the park?"
His bunny ears flopped before he wiggled long-clawed toes.
He replied, "No. I'm looking for ants cuz I'm an aardvark."
I invited him to join me for dinner at the café, Java Joes.


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 8-20-17 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/29/2017 6:32:00 AM
Ha ha, he's a little similar to ....was it Ralph? a TV Series a long time ago..... Very clever and cute. GL in the contest.
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Date: 8/29/2017 6:34:00 AM
I think you mean, Alf. Thank you, Suzanne.
Date: 8/21/2017 8:45:00 AM
Hark hark it's an aardvark...one of gods strangest critters...but great write Lin...best wishes my friend...^WW^
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Date: 8/21/2017 10:26:00 AM
A barking aardvark...who da thought? Thanks, WW.
Date: 8/21/2017 12:47:00 AM
ohh, this was fun to read, lin... very creatively done that now, i'm trying to fill my blank mind like andrea.. huggs
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Date: 8/21/2017 10:25:00 AM
Thanks, nette. I'm sure you'll find something unique to write about.
Date: 8/20/2017 5:52:00 PM
Lin, I am LOVING the animal poems. Kevin sure picked a great topic. I just need to hurry and narrow down an animal to do. I love animals!!! (it's hard for me just to pick one!) You chose well.
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:44:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I googled 'strange animals.'
Date: 8/20/2017 5:13:00 PM
Very imaginative, and skillfully constructed. You use good imagery and maintain a poetic flow throughout the whole piece. Well done. Emile.
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:44:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2017 2:45:00 PM
- He is so cute ... he is welcome to my home tomorrow :) - Fun :)) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Hugs.
Date: 8/20/2017 12:10:00 PM
ha ha Lin great humour here I see it wasn't 'arrd verk' for you to write this witty poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/20/2017 1:50:00 PM
It wasn't aard at all...you silly lady. haha Thanks, Jan.
Date: 8/20/2017 11:47:00 AM
Hi Lin, well there you go, i thought an aardvark was an ant eater. Back to school. I got a chuckle from this wonderful little piece. Good luck in the contest. An excellent, fun write from your pen. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/20/2017 1:50:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Mike. Happy you found the humor in it.
Date: 8/20/2017 10:42:00 AM
Ha ha, nice one, Lin, new animal to me:)
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Date: 8/20/2017 1:49:00 PM
Well then I'm glad you stopped by with your comment and got a zoology lesson. lol Thanks, Jo.
Date: 8/20/2017 9:32:00 AM
I love aardvarks, they are cool animals once you get to know them! What a fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading your excellent poem this morning! You have me reeling in laughter with this funny poem Lin, thank you for sharing this we us! Great Work!! GL in contest!
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Date: 8/20/2017 10:37:00 AM
Thank you, Russell. Often these cute little creatures are mistaken for ant eaters...glad you liked it.
Date: 8/20/2017 8:51:00 AM
He is adorable Lin...better cut his nails
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:19:00 AM
Thanks, Tim. I'll have to get some heavy duty clippers for those nails.
Date: 8/20/2017 8:49:00 AM
This is a cute poem, great for the contest! I hope it does well :)
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:17:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Heidi.
Date: 8/20/2017 8:30:00 AM
Wonderful weaving of words and a fun read!
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
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