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Funny Lookin' Creature With a Squeaky Bark

I looked behind me when I heard a squeaky little bark
From out of the bushes, a kangaroo-looking creature rose
His bright green eyes flashed neon signs at me in the dark,
then he raised his long piggy snout and struck a silly pose.

"Have you escaped from the zoo to wander in the park?"
His bunny ears flopped before he wiggled long-clawed toes.
He replied, "No. I'm looking for ants cuz I'm an aardvark."
I invited him to join me for dinner at the café, Java Joes.


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 8-20-17 

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Suzanne Delaney Date: 8/29/2017 6:32:00 AM Ha ha, he's a little similar to ....was it Ralph? a TV Series a long time ago..... Very clever and cute. GL in the contest. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/29/2017 6:34:00 AM I think you mean, Alf. Thank you, Suzanne.

Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 8:45:00 AM Hark hark it's an aardvark...one of gods strangest critters...but great write Lin...best wishes my friend...^WW^ Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/21/2017 10:26:00 AM A barking aardvark...who da thought? Thanks, WW.

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/21/2017 12:47:00 AM ohh, this was fun to read, lin... very creatively done that now, i'm trying to fill my blank mind like andrea.. huggs Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/21/2017 10:25:00 AM Thanks, nette. I'm sure you'll find something unique to write about.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/20/2017 5:52:00 PM Lin, I am LOVING the animal poems. Kevin sure picked a great topic. I just need to hurry and narrow down an animal to do. I love animals!!! (it's hard for me just to pick one!) You chose well. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/20/2017 6:44:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. I googled 'strange animals.'

Emile Pinet Date: 8/20/2017 5:13:00 PM Very imaginative, and skillfully constructed. You use good imagery and maintain a poetic flow throughout the whole piece. Well done. Emile. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/20/2017 6:44:00 PM Thanks ever so much, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/20/2017 2:45:00 PM - He is so cute ... he is welcome to my home tomorrow :) - Fun :)) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/20/2017 6:43:00 PM Thanks, Anne-Lise. Hugs.

Jan Allison Date: 8/20/2017 12:10:00 PM ha ha Lin great humour here I see it wasn't 'arrd verk' for you to write this witty poem:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/20/2017 1:50:00 PM It wasn't aard at all...you silly lady. haha Thanks, Jan.

Vladislav Raven Date: 8/20/2017 11:47:00 AM Hi Lin, well there you go, i thought an aardvark was an ant eater. Back to school. I got a chuckle from this wonderful little piece. Good luck in the contest. An excellent, fun write from your pen. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/20/2017 1:50:00 PM Thanks a bunch, Mike. Happy you found the humor in it.

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/20/2017 10:42:00 AM Ha ha, nice one, Lin, new animal to me:) Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/20/2017 1:49:00 PM Well then I'm glad you stopped by with your comment and got a zoology lesson. lol Thanks, Jo.

Russell Sivey Date: 8/20/2017 9:32:00 AM I love aardvarks, they are cool animals once you get to know them! What a fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading your excellent poem this morning! You have me reeling in laughter with this funny poem Lin, thank you for sharing this we us! Great Work!! GL in contest! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/20/2017 10:37:00 AM Thank you, Russell. Often these cute little creatures are mistaken for ant eaters...glad you liked it.

Tim Smith Date: 8/20/2017 8:51:00 AM He is adorable Lin...better cut his nails Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/20/2017 9:19:00 AM Thanks, Tim. I'll have to get some heavy duty clippers for those nails.

Heidi Sands Date: 8/20/2017 8:49:00 AM This is a cute poem, great for the contest! I hope it does well :) Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/20/2017 9:17:00 AM Thanks a lot, Heidi.

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/20/2017 8:30:00 AM Wonderful weaving of words and a fun read! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/20/2017 9:13:00 AM Thank you, Vijay.