Funny Limerick For Summer

Loosening her two-piece in the sun
Gail rubbed sweet cream to tan, to have fun-
     With bod on a hilla
     Ants crawled with much thrilla--
Ran she, exposing a burnt bun-bun !

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Andrea Dietrich

August 19, 2024 at 2:10 PM

The ending is hilarious, Nette. Congrats

Paula Goldsmith

August 18, 2024 at 2:47 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your cute/fun Limerick write. I hate having ants around to share my day with. Have a fun day writing away...................

Tania Kitchin

August 18, 2024 at 9:10 AM

Nette, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.

Duke Beaufort

August 9, 2024 at 11:21 AM

Nette, a funny thing to think about....we hope we can really relax sometime, but then the unexpected happens! Ouch!!

Janice Canerdy

August 6, 2024 at 7:37 AM

Good one, Nette! There's just something about being covered in ants that makes a person completely disrobe!! Janice

Sara Kendrick

August 6, 2024 at 4:24 AM

Cute. I would not have wanted to be in her shoes. LOL..The burn and ant bites together would have been horrible. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

August 5, 2024 at 9:56 PM

what a funny picture, Nette. I enjoyed this. Will see your soupie now

Sam Kauffman

August 4, 2024 at 9:49 AM

Ouch! Very cute and VERY funny "exposing" the foibles of "sweet cream" over suntan cream with "burning" consequences! Must have been hard to sit for a few days. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Ink Empress

August 3, 2024 at 6:06 AM

Oh no burnt bun bun! How embarrassing haha. Brilliant limerick well written with creative wordplay! Love it! You do fun poems too very well dear nette! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always