Funny Limerick For Summer

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For Tania Kitchin 's Funny Summer Limerick Contest 3 Aug 24

Loosening her two-piece in the sun
Gail rubbed sweet cream to tan, to have fun-
     With bod on a hilla
     Ants crawled with much thrilla--
Ran she, exposing a burnt bun-bun !

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2024 2:10:00 PM

The ending is hilarious, Nette. Congrats

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2024 2:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your cute/fun Limerick write. I hate having ants around to share my day with. Have a fun day writing away...................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2024 9:10:00 AM

Nette, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/9/2024 11:21:00 AM

Nette, a funny thing to think about....we hope we can really relax sometime, but then the unexpected happens! Ouch!!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/6/2024 7:37:00 AM

Good one, Nette! There's just something about being covered in ants that makes a person completely disrobe!! Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2024 4:24:00 AM

Cute. I would not have wanted to be in her shoes. LOL..The burn and ant bites together would have been horrible. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2024 9:56:00 PM

what a funny picture, Nette. I enjoyed this. Will see your soupie now

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/4/2024 9:49:00 AM

Ouch! Very cute and VERY funny "exposing" the foibles of "sweet cream" over suntan cream with "burning" consequences! Must have been hard to sit for a few days. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Ink Empress

Date: 8/3/2024 6:06:00 AM

Oh no burnt bun bun! How embarrassing haha. Brilliant limerick well written with creative wordplay! Love it! You do fun poems too very well dear nette! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always

Valsa George

Date: 8/2/2024 10:11:00 PM

Ha...ha! This is so very funny. Poor Gail, ants must have crawled into her private parts too... ! A great entry for the contest. All the Best, Nette.