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Written 6th August, 2026 for Stars or Fireflies Fibonacci Poetry Contest sponsored by Hiya Sharma 

Funeral of Fireflies

Glass, traps one spark in the ferns, spirits of the dead, tethered above the wet creek bed, guiding the departed through the mangrove roots tonight. They hover in the liminal space between the living and the silent wet bush graves. We did not know we caught a wandering spirit alive, glowing with the pale green light of someone trying to find their way through the gully. Unscrewing the cold rim of the glass I watched the little ancestor crawl out across my thumb to hesitate a moment in the damp night air before heading upwards into the canopy towards the guiding southern stars.
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September 17, 2026 at 10:51 AM
Oh yes, letting them go ~ this really teaches one a lot about life too! Such a soulfully moving and heart-stirring Fibonacci you've inked here dear Alison, really like the imagery, those spirits of the dead guided by the soft glimmers sent by the heavens.. how evocative is that! "We did not know we caught a wandering spirit alive" sigh! The wandering soul! Searching for a way to rise beyond everything! Very impactful throughout i must say. Congratulations on your placement in my contest, loved reading this, keep shininnnn and writinnnn 💫🌙🍂🧚🧚
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 2:42 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment and contest. I had not written in this form before.🌹❤️
Borg Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 1:53 PM
" I watched the little ancestor crawl out across my thumb", so pleased you released it Alison. Congratulations on your Honorable Placement.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 1:56 PM
Thank you Pascal for your visit .... yes you have to let them go.✨
Daub Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 11:26 AM
Alison Beautiful message, COMPELLING structure. now one of my most cherished poems. frank daub
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:28 PM
Thank you Frank.🌹
Hind Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 7:50 PM
A FAV!!!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:41 PM
Thanks ❤️
Hayward Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:34 AM
You intervene light and darkness so well. Gorgeous write, you do so well, in your unique style.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 3:53 PM
Thank you - this style is evolving each time the words find their way to the paper.
Jones Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:25 AM
What a wonderful creative write! Best wishes Alison!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:27 AM
Thank you Karen for visiting
Anaya Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 9:13 AM
Love it, Alison. Uniquely penned in your wonderful voice, the humans I sense spiritual guides, felt spiritual. Matches the image, I've yet to see em. Bol on a high placement for sure 🕊️
Anaya Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 5:17 AM
my bad...
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 5:39 AM
Thank you Anaya - this tested me a little.
Cunningham Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 12:46 AM
Nicely done Alison, amazing creatures, I saw one in Turkey once, just one I'd love to see a swarm of them. Good luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tomv🌹
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 1:00 AM
Thanks - I have never seen them. There are fireflies near me but have as yet not managed to get to them at the right time of year.❤️
Anderson Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 11:51 PM
Very well done. Loved it. The high syllable counts are a real layout issues. Even counting them! Cheers
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 11:56 PM
They sure are .... I liked what you did.❤️. William is very clever.
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