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Fun Under Sparkly Stars

Raven black evenings
waiting for the ice cream truck
on the starlit stairs
Crowds of blossoming children
eager for a Tastee Freez

Smoky summer nights
the fun day's heat lingering
'til the daily treat
A favorite memory
tracks the golden halls of time


Written on 8/20/2022
For: Childhood Nostalgia Poetry Contest
Sponsor: JCB Brul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 3:12 PM
...golden halls of time. Just lovely Evelyn. Congratulations on your win! Linda
Buehler Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 4:50 PM
Thank you very much for the compliment, and for your kind congratulations, Linda. Have a nice evening, Evelyn :)
Horsman Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 1:27 AM
Like Victor (comment below) you take me there, all over the world children, love the same treats, The tankas are excellent.
Buehler Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 10:45 AM
I appreciate the happy thoughts, Harry. Have a great day.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 10:28 PM
Wish I could join the fun. Amazing poem.
Buehler Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Thank you, Victor. Blessings and hugs.
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