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07/04/25

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Contest by Brian Strand

      Went for
      fishing.
      with friend.
      Prompt came
      Ticket
      checker.

      I ran
      on speed.
      The guy
      chased fast,
       caught me
       at ease.
      
       At once 
       showed my
        ticket.
       He got
      too much 
      surprised.
     
     He asked
    ' Then, why
      to flee ?'
     I smiled
     ' because
      my friend 
      had no
      ticket.
     Now he
     got time
      to run
      away.'

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