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Fun Fishing

Rex and Rita went to catch fish, Carrying with them safe steel dish; Though did not know the art, Both fancied playing smart, Could not, yet, fulfill their core wish...! Pond should be troubled - said Rex vexed. At this Rita answered perplexed: It's a dull dark deep pond, With great army of frond, Wherein dangers deadly refluxed...! Rex got an idea brand new. He spread pieces of bread a few. Schools of fish soon he found, Swimming quickly around, Carefully then his hook he threw...! A tiny fish like a tadpole, Hung like puzzled and riddled soul... Rita felt compassion, Rex in sheer game-passion, Shut the little fish in his bowl...! They found a fancy aqua jar, Kept their cat away very far; Lo, she swam all alone, Within shut marine zone, Lonely and lost like a lame star...! Rex and Rita, within hearts, felt, That this fish will into death melt; They left her in the pond, Saw her swiftly abscond, Went back home, joy within them dwelt...! 23 November 2022 Children's Limericks Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 11/25/2022 6:39:00 AM
Christuraj, this is a wondeful, heartwarming story--creatively told. I really enjoyed it! Janice
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Date: 11/24/2022 8:56:00 PM
What a lovely story ! Rex and Rita make a beautiful couple and I can relate to all the hazzles they felt while pursuing their fancy of fishing ! Though the reward was never in match with their trouble, still they enjoyed ! A lovely story for children !All the Best!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/24/2022 10:07:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/24/2022 5:22:00 AM
What a neat tall fish tale in these limericks. Way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing your story and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/24/2022 7:35:00 AM
Cannot forget your graces. Wishing you all the best!

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