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Fun and Games With My Banana - a Poem For Darren Watson

TO FULLY UNDERSTAND THIS POEM PLEASE READ MY POEM 'HELLLPPPP I'VE LOST MY BANANA' AND DARREN WATSON'S POEM 'FUN GAMES' Good folks of Poetry Soup you may have read of my dilemma My Banana it went missing – it was nicked by this lovely fella Darren invited me to join him in some fun and games I don’t call him big boy for nothing its one of our pet names Darren has confessed to me he stole my juicy fruit I’d sapped all his energy he was worried I’d give him the boot So if you don’t see us here for a while it’s down to the roll of a dice If he wants me to play his games I won’t have to stop and think twice. Jan Allison 15th May 2014 Poem was written after reading Darren's poem 'Fun Games' and is printed with his permission

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Date: 6/13/2014 3:11:00 AM
I must say that I'm not really sure how to take your banana poems. I do find them suspect but also enticing as well. Please correct me if I'm wrong. However, I do enjoy the imagery. Good job on both poems.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2014 3:24:00 AM
Hi Rockman I had better explain - Darren Waston and I now write together under the name jadazzle united - we have an incredible friendship and tease each other mercilessly - our poems are all fantasy based - we have never met! hugs jan xxx
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Rockman Pritts
Date: 6/13/2014 3:16:00 AM
Having read the following comments on this poem, let me recommend one of mine. Sweet Love. If you like that one, I have others.
Date: 5/18/2014 1:03:00 PM
Love your humerous side Jan! It takes the mickey out of the banana! /x/ paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2014 1:22:00 PM
Darren is a very naughty boy believe me Paul! Hugs as ever Jan xx
Date: 5/16/2014 3:20:00 PM
There seems to be a bit of monkey business going on *lol* Enjoy that banana.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2014 3:27:00 PM
LOL Richard thanks for the lovely comment. We have great fun with our banter but Darren and I are simply brilliant friends and thoroughly enjoy working together as jadazzle. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx
Date: 5/15/2014 10:34:00 PM
Jan or fruity Freda as you insisted I call you in our game . You threw double six and I had to do banana tricks , lol
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2014 12:56:00 AM
OMG Darren stop telling the world ALL our secrets! Hugs as ever Jan xxx
Date: 5/15/2014 7:30:00 PM
lol, saw that you had made a sequel to your quest for the legendary banana, great write!
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2014 12:55:00 AM
Thanks Jose for dropping by. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/15/2014 5:47:00 PM
Have fun and bring your banana :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2014 5:56:00 PM
Am very wary of Darren now he has an insatiable appetite and not just for bananas bless him! LOL hugs Jan xxxx
Date: 5/15/2014 3:51:00 PM
wowowowow!!! ...Hey Jan, don't be selfish girl... We ALL want to play with your game.. haha... roll the dice.. eat some banana... whatever it'll be... Can we share to your story ,let's be one big family?...OMG!!! that's gonna be a worlwide ramble show... don't like!!!! ... Great write as ever... you got me strucked.. and choked again.. (hmmmmm..)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2014 3:55:00 PM
LOL Aiyah my missing banana and Darren's creative write were the inspiration behind this poem. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

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