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Inspired by Halloween hustle scenes
Avenged adult world Fishy funny kids’ play world The saturnine feast. Sorcerous* Nox night Lone places yawn hell pervades global fun-disease Ghosts grovel and then wolves weep Goblins grin skeletons sway Thus the streets savaged ********* * Roman goddess of night ====================== Date: 28th Sept'13 Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Everything Halloween by Russell Sivey

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Date: 5/23/2015 11:12:00 AM
DEEP HAIKU
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Date: 9/30/2013 10:43:00 AM
Trick my treat this is complicated loosen up it's holloween coming up. Although the world is falling apart, lets enjoy what we have left my friend. Go get yourself a sweet treat and just Remember for a little while was it Was like when you were young and just a kid.
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:10:00 AM
This is an eerie and creative write. The imagery lets the reader feel they are actually in this "monsterous" world. nice job
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Date: 9/30/2013 6:52:00 AM
A mind provoking Haiku! Incomparable conception!
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Date: 9/29/2013 10:11:00 PM
Excellent haiku with good message. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 9/29/2013 9:35:00 AM
I like ninety percent of this poem. are you sure global fun- disease can't be something else though? Like maybe "Epidemic of Joy"?
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Date: 9/29/2013 12:11:00 AM
This is one great haiku. The second stanza says it all. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 9/28/2013 11:19:00 PM
Aloha Dr. Mehta... funny how all hallows eve is perceived... yet the thoughts pervade each mind of the possibilities that there is a more dark and profound basis for the mask of fear you present herein... a view of irreality at its best... base upon your closing lines... thank you for the message that opens all to the dark side of one's conscience... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.
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