Fulton-Lucerne

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Kat Crane

Date: 5/10/2009 12:04:00 PM

I can see and smell this! 3 very well placed words. Kat x

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 5/6/2009 12:07:00 AM

Well done Brian, you certainly cut this one to siaze as you bailed it up tidily in your shape poetry. Few words in such expressive form mean so much more muse! Big smiles, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/4/2009 7:24:00 AM

Makes me want to take a deep breath and smell the sweetness! :) ~ Thanks you for all the kind comments on my work each day, so do appreciate them! ~ Carrie

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/4/2009 7:09:00 AM

Brian you always tease the eye and mind ... may blessings ever keep your genius bright.

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/4/2009 5:23:00 AM

Amazing what you can see and smell with three words! So well done! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/4/2009 4:30:00 AM

Lovely write Brian..you master the short form with ease.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/4/2009 3:33:00 AM

I see the shape.... I understand the words. It's a fun poem. I Googled fulton-LUCERNE. >>>>> Lots about a lake!!! Please help me understand the title. I love it. I get the shape, but I've been puzzled for the second time. Please clue me in.... I'm new at poetry forms. Lovingly, Dane