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As graceful spine bends with the night That every movement draws delight Like a bone of pinion on flight While my own wings cuddle her tight--- But in slumber, she lounges bright And coiling near me, I alight--- As graceful spine bends with the night. 11th June 2016 Contest by nette onclaud,Titles of Novels Lovely Bones Monorhyme--Lines 1 and 7 repeated

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Date: 6/14/2016 4:34:00 PM
Very lovely...delightful content and an effective repeated opening and closing line. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 6/14/2016 2:50:00 PM
what an awesome take on the theme, Franco. BIG congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:20:00 AM
franco, i can feel her graceful movement while reading this fine work... the repetition gives more impact to your lines!..thanks for being part of my contest and warm congrats!..huggs
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