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Full Moon Fever

At the bus stop appeared a large crowd They were cheering and clapping out loud Admiring a blond in her room Whilst she mooned in full bloom Then she turned round all excited and proud

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2010 7:10:00 PM

lovely, James, it drew me in,..p.d.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/30/2010 1:11:00 AM

Oh, just love that full moon, awesome limerick. Harry

David Smalling

Date: 9/29/2010 9:12:00 AM

Voyeurs had a shine, I see, and courage made sweet to sensibility ... awesome cinematic, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2010 4:36:00 PM

What an exhibitionist she must have been!! Cute one, James.

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/27/2010 1:33:00 PM

Couldn't help but smile as I read this, James! Yeah, the full moon will make you do that. Good luck in Deb's Contest... Peace, love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 8:33:00 AM

A pleasure to read your creative poetry today James. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/26/2010 2:41:00 PM

LOL -- Not what I was expecting but a witty take on a "full moon in bloom," James. Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/26/2010 2:15:00 PM

sounds like Chaucer dear friend LOL and of course you can enter YET I give you a heads up...you will need to lengthen the tail ;) (Your Head Mistress loves words the more the better! continue your blonds advebture!)Light & Love

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/26/2010 11:24:00 AM

adorable, cute limerick James

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/26/2010 10:46:00 AM

Witty Mr. Fraser can just imagine their suprise hehe enjoyed your humour ;)