James Fraser Poet Limerick

Full Moon Fever

At the bus stop appeared a large crowd
They were cheering and clapping out loud
      Admiring a blond in her room
      Whilst she mooned in full bloom
Then she turned round all excited and proud

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Poet Destroyer A September 30, 2010 at 7:10 PM lovely, James, it drew me in,..p.d.

Harry Horsman September 30, 2010 at 1:11 AM Oh, just love that full moon, awesome limerick. Harry

David Smalling September 29, 2010 at 9:12 AM Voyeurs had a shine, I see, and courage made sweet to sensibility ... awesome cinematic, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich September 28, 2010 at 4:36 PM What an exhibitionist she must have been!! Cute one, James.

Audrey Haick September 27, 2010 at 1:33 PM Couldn't help but smile as I read this, James! Yeah, the full moon will make you do that. Good luck in Deb's Contest... Peace, love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown September 27, 2010 at 8:33 AM A pleasure to read your creative poetry today James. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire September 26, 2010 at 2:41 PM LOL -- Not what I was expecting but a witty take on a "full moon in bloom," James. Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi September 26, 2010 at 2:15 PM sounds like Chaucer dear friend LOL and of course you can enter YET I give you a heads up...you will need to lengthen the tail ;) (Your Head Mistress loves words the more the better! continue your blonds advebture!)Light & Love

Francine Roberts September 26, 2010 at 11:24 AM adorable, cute limerick James

Wilma Neels September 26, 2010 at 10:46 AM Witty Mr. Fraser can just imagine their suprise hehe enjoyed your humour ;)