Full Moon

Light plays 
across my soul
with the taunting touch of a lover
resting softly on places once dead
now unfolding, surprised
by color, texture, warmth

But then - gone
no, there, again, flitting
lighting yet another gray valley
arousing emotion
where none had existed,
or maybe had once
but learn-ed dullness
caused it to 
retreat
hide

Feathersoft,
erratic, even playful 
movements
my mind tries to
anticipate or follow
in vain
only able to allow
the play to 
entice, 
licking away
thin layers 
of doubt,
regret,
shame.

Spaces 
where only a “now”
blossoms - shyly first,
then emboldened
by each random
touch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/30/2012 10:21:00 AM
Very sensual...wonderful Ms. Bu!!!!
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Date: 9/21/2011 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:45:00 PM
ahhh you are a few verse gal like me most excellent, intriguing, multi-faceted! Keep it up! light & love
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/17/2011 9:21:00 PM
Thanks!, Yup a poet who can't make rhymes, that's me! Free verse just lets me say it the way I feel it.... you too, eh?
Date: 9/17/2011 5:03:00 PM
CONGRATS SUSAN ON YOUR FIFTH PLACE WIN WITH THIS DYNAMIC FEATURED POEM LUV..
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/17/2011 9:21:00 PM
Thanks for noticing...!!!
Date: 9/17/2011 12:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Susan. Kim
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/17/2011 3:02:00 PM
thanks so much!, Sue
Date: 9/17/2011 11:21:00 AM
Very nice Susan...congrats on your win.
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/17/2011 3:03:00 PM
thanks for your comment!
Date: 9/17/2011 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D.Susan
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:47:00 AM
A winning congratulations! CR
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:09:00 AM
Susan, Congratulations on your win, this is an amazing featured poem. Thank you so much for entering and sharing it with us. A super well done poem,, God bless,... LINDA
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/17/2011 3:03:00 PM
thanks so much, from you a real compliment!, Susan
Date: 9/7/2011 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on a lovely poem featured! Laura :)
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Date: 9/6/2011 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:40:00 PM
Omg you really need to get to writing more and posting coz I really love your poetry! This may be my fave of yours!
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/8/2011 2:49:00 PM
Gina, thanks for the encouragement. Your comment made me read a bunch of yours, and I thinkwe must fly on at least the same general moonbeam! cuz yours resonate with me too!
Date: 7/5/2011 12:29:00 AM
nice layout, good images, I love your poem!
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