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'full Disclosure'

like ice evaporates on a hot day, my protests disappear, every time... your lips unearth mine

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James Fraser

Date: 4/3/2011 7:46:00 AM

Beautifully sensuous Wilma, love it....:)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/21/2011 2:15:00 PM

You just wamed up New York with that one!!!! very sensual my dear... Cold and Snow here again...Catching up tomorrow on all I misses in the last days... Hope your well and warm....with love Michael

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/21/2011 8:35:00 AM

Very passionate and sensual, Wilma. Steamy images here captured on paper! Fantastc Dodoitsu! Hope your weekend's going to be great, Wilma. Love, Annalise

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 1/20/2011 5:38:00 PM

This poem tells me a lot about you Wilma and that is naughty. So now you know my secret with me ears we make a good couple hehe Love Sid mad as ever

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2011 4:38:00 PM

wow, one of your best little poems, Wilma! For spicy contest?? Awesome

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/20/2011 3:50:00 PM

Nice sensual write with this dodoitsu, Wilma

Daver Austin

Date: 1/20/2011 1:30:00 PM

Aint love grand. Also - love this form. Makes you want to write something romantic. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2011 1:21:00 PM

Wow ..Wilma u keep wowing the "Sweetheart" with these fantastic words.. if for the contest for Michael.. good luck my friend.. going to make it a fav luv..

Joe Flach

Date: 1/20/2011 11:01:00 AM

So, I am sure, my dear Wilma, that you protest often - not to take a stand, but to have your ice melted!!!! You are a sly one, aren't you - ;-) Nice write. Joe

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/20/2011 9:11:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Wilma. Wishing you a wonderful day. The best to you if this is for the contest. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/20/2011 8:43:00 AM

She says, "But, but..." and then he kisses her and she melts in his arms. This is such a warm-hearted look at romance, dear. Send a handsome fella my way so I can experience this feeling. Wonderful write, Wilma! Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/20/2011 6:37:00 AM

Hey Wilma, Uitstaande skryf! Hoe is jou? Dankie vir al jou vriendelike kommentaar! Hope you are having a good time! Al die beste en neem goeie sorg! ...Gert:)

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/20/2011 5:11:00 AM

Wilma, This is so beautiful, love it. I love the contrast of ice melting everything away with your loved ones lips. Wow