Full Circle . . .

I walk to the place I laughed the most wholly
With stars in my hair and holding a dripping ice lolly
I look to the days when laughter was just gay
when true to her word mum was just a shout away

Holding onto memories, rejoicing in my past
Alas I have forgotten about this day that has past
My children I watch with a numbed expression
Wet cheeks abound in this selfmade prison

I fear not what may happen but build a masked exterior
Depressed and saddened I awaken in this manner
Angst and bleak I sleep with this dilemma
Yet unknownst I hold onto this past long unveiled

Begone unhappiness rejoice in these here times  
Look to their future, for my progeny it will rewind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/27/2010 2:53:00 PM
The peom seems to project your feeling/story well, I thoroughly enjoyed it. -Mitchell
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Date: 5/2/2010 5:29:00 PM
a very true verse! Light & Love
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Date: 2/7/2010 1:57:00 PM
hello sweet friend! so nice to hear from you and thanks for your comment on my poem - although it is from a while back as I have not been posting here except on and off rarely. your poem is absolutely amazing as ever! especially love the uplifting ending! hope life is being good to you - feel free to write me any time. love & hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 2/7/2010 1:28:00 PM
I enjoyed that, thanks
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