Full Accountability

In life, there’s plenty, and various points of view
Aged twenty, forty or more, give or take a few
Whether one has gone full circle, half or even third
This question has been asked, or you may just have heard.

When something you have done, or have decided upon
Like a referee’s call that’s been derided on
Do you calmly stay, to answer in rebuttal
Or do you go for drama, finding ways for acquittal.

At one point in our lives, we may protest or howl
It’s us who made the wrong call, or even did what’s foul
What to do after that, is anyone, everyone's guess
It would reflect our morals, the code that we profess.

Being adult is to try to make amends , apologize
sincerely, no platitudes,to those we've wronged, sympathize
Pointing not to others, guilty or not, to blame
Or say such other excuse, that sucks or just as lame.

Not seeking refuge, but owns up to accountability
Being an adult means taking full responsibility.
From all the things we've learned, what puts us to the test
To walk the talk, the meaning, separates us from the rest.


KIM PATRICE NUNEZ
The TRUE Meaning of Being Adult Contest - Honorable Mention
Sponsor : FJ Thomas
25 April 2015
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Fraser Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations Kim on your fine win with this wise message filled poetry. We can all veer off sync, it's the wise ones that find their way back on track, very nice read, James :) :)
Williams Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Wow, congratulations on winning the competition Kim. It is a wonderful poem, so full of many truisms in life. Own up, admit your wrong,take responsibility for your actions. You need to match up the talk with the way you act. A beauty Kim. Hugs from John
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:51 PM
WELL DONE,, LOVE IT... SKAT
Strauss Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 1:23 AM
Ate kim! Congrats! You deserve it!
Villarosa Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 12:59 AM
Congrats, Kim on winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
Ellison Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Don't know what to say dear Kimmie, other than, I'M BLOWN AWAY by your impressive philosophical write! I love your style and I bow to your poetic talent! Love ya girl... xxx
Allison Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 5:49 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Richards Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Owning up to accountability.....wow. That, indeed is the true road to being an adult !! Well written and so true is this poem ! Congratulations, Kim !!
A   Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:57 PM
wonderful and deep..LINDA
Gibson Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Kim, congratulations on your placement in the contest; I like how you handled the theme.
Carmack Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Kim, congrats on making the cut for this contest. I like the reflections and deflections I see in your poem.
Laurie Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 10:29 PM
Hello Kim... very wise words indeed Kim. Being adult is supposed to be taking responsibility so to teach the next generation. Thank you Kim - Lindsay
Vaso Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 9:31 PM
The only "air traffic" is cause I am flying high with all your kind words!!!!
Vaso Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 9:13 PM
Ops I am slipping I just added the A7!!!!!!
Vaso Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 8:57 PM
Wow Beauty and Wisdom!!! I am duly impressed!
Onclaud Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 4:44 PM
soo right, kim... for every action, there is a consequence and we are responsible for it.. how fine and wise.. well done!.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 8:34 AM
- A fantastic write dear Kim - One of your sentences I want to emphasize: "Being an adult means taking full responsibility" - I wish you best of luck in the contest - a 7 !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Villarosa Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 3:25 AM
Very well said, if only accountability is intuitive, it would create charisma to be followed by others. What we need is awareness to all our habitual behavior that are restricting us to face reality. Good luck to you in this contest, mabuhay! kabayan. (^_^) Noel.
Pinet Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 10:32 AM
Your words enter my mind resonate there and force me to feel their weight. Well done. Emile.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 7:35 AM
:)! what can I say more but it's true.. . the sad reality is that some grows old by age and looks but not with their attitude...~olive eloisa
Das Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 7:07 AM
An awesome write. This indeed is the true meaning of being an adult. #7
Mumo Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 5:31 AM
You are such a gifted poet. You have captured the true meaning of adulthood in a subtly deft way. 7+++!
Allison Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 4:09 AM
wise words indeed Kim - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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