Fulcrum of a rose Sixth Premier Contest Winner

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Written 20/06/2025

 

If we can only smell the soul, 
will it then smell like the rose?
in gentle aroma of passing breeze,
in morning fresh dew-swept air?
can we at birth of a little one,
breathe-in essence of his deeper self,
past the innocence of his smile,
can we see a universe entire?
do roses then live a spiritual life,
and speak with god with incense deep?
in their brief life on earth, is scent,
a language to reach other souls?
many flowers wither and fall,
like us in this garden of life.
while we talk of souls we do not see,
the rose has a soul that we can smell.
that is perhaps the reason why,
we leave roses at a departed’s grave,
so we can speak soul to soul,
through the aroma of their mystic self.
million roses I would plant to
honour millions who lived and died,
if only we could smell their souls,
loving memories would smell as sweet.

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Date: 6/24/2025 10:56:00 AM
wow, this is really good work. I hope it got a great placement. Congrats.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/28/2025 12:31:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!:)
Date: 6/23/2025 2:23:00 PM
Such a fantastic poem with many layers of emotional metaphor. If we could smell their spirits, love memories would smell just as sweet. Congratulations on your win. It was difficult to choose which stanza to highlight because they were all equally excellent. I wish you a cheerful day.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/28/2025 12:32:00 AM
Thanks My friend, for your fine words and kindness!:) Delighted.
Date: 6/23/2025 1:26:00 PM
Back with Congrats!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/28/2025 12:32:00 AM
Thanks Kim!:) Much Obliged!
Date: 6/21/2025 2:27:00 PM
if only we could smell their souls, loving memories would smell as sweet. What an original thought this is dear Krish, a winner of a poem for sure !
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/21/2025 10:02:00 PM
Dear Mystic, Thanks so much! Loved your POTD poem!
Date: 6/21/2025 10:40:00 AM
What a powerful write you have here. Great Ending... Never thought about if we could smell souls. They may smell as sweet as a lovely rose. "Good Luck" Have a blessed weekend writing away.........
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/21/2025 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Paula! We are all linked, souls and roses!
Date: 6/20/2025 4:53:00 PM
We can only know in part, and impart our love from the start…with endings there are oft roses.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/20/2025 10:58:00 PM
Thanks Kim! You speak in rhymes!:)
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