Fulcrum of a Rose

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When Mom died, twice I smelled the scent of roses where there shouldn't have been and had never been before. The second time, I put my hand on my chest and whispered, " mom...?"

Line of inquiry: track where lies the fulcrum of the fragrance of a rose, then likewise find within, your soul —Unseeking Seeker Contest

Fulcrum of a Rose

pinwheel spinning
   reds, pinks, whites, butters
      I found the garden’s rest in
peace  s i g n
      a spray, spewed across this holder
         of breath
letting  g o
                  the mailbox painted army green
         underneath my nose
I know     no more     no less
     than lessons  l e a r n e d
with win some whiffs
                   does it pass the sniff test…
I’d like to find delightful the  p r i c k i n g
   of my nostrils, the inducement of petals
at first velvety soft
                              their perfumes
            make my heart bleed
my uncle’s in a green suit, laid out
   with just one truck punch, and it lingers
his scent, his lack of smile, the coldness of
                     the hand I touched -
he’s asleep…he didn’t move a finger
                  f r a g i l e
youth forever bathed in rose-scented water

a single red rose fought for his life in the snow

the scent lingers in
                                the leftover towers
                                                                I’m adept

in such ghostly afterglow
                                          my husband knows
     I prefer                T U L I P S

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Date: 6/23/2025 2:51:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations on winning this contest with a great poem with blooming metaphors, which ends beautifully.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 2:55:00 PM
I so appreciate you, dear poet!
Date: 6/23/2025 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations poet friend on your win in this contest with a beautiful poem with flowery imagery, ending with a frank twist. Wishing you a lovely day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 6/23/2025 9:39:00 AM
I love the delicate flow of imagery in this sublime poem. Congratulations dear Kim This is a FAVE! Stay prolific.^___^ JCB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 9:53:00 AM
I appreciate that fave! Thank you, JCB!
Date: 6/14/2025 7:48:00 PM
This is like the second time I got deja vu with one of your poems. This is beyond beautiful or even breathtaking, dear Kim. You are so gifted- so many hugs your way! Thank you for sharing your writing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 9:08:00 AM
You help me so much in confidence. I appreciate your poetry friendship so much!
Date: 6/14/2025 3:20:00 PM
wow! impressive poetry and response to the contest. I'm sure you'll place, if not win. You inspired me. Best wishes with the contest yellow rose
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2025 4:59:00 PM
Thank you! Best wishes!
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